The story of my life, and death

[earth_defender]

I once told a story, one so long ago of the day I died. He had been there, the man who I’d called the Doctor, just the same way many others had, but he was the man who owned my heart and would until the end of my days. From the Moment the man in the leather jacket took my hand and told me to run, my life would never been the same. He was a stranger

Comments

[tardisdoll]

oh that is so beautiful! very in character for Rose and The Doctor and brilliant plot. brought tears to my eyes quite a few times. I absolutely loved it!
*memories*
xxx

[earth_defender]

I'm so glad you liked it. I've been writing it for about 4 days on and off and I thought it would never end. I don't usually write more than 1000 words but this just went on and on...It will teach me not to be tired in bed and thing up the outline to this.

I love it. It makes me feel all bouncy...

[dynapink]

That was a seriously interesting take on several old cliches, and it pretty much worked. That was the most different way I've yet seen presented about how he could (or would, for that matter) get back into the parallel world, and it's bang on perfect regarding how they'd spend the rest of Rose's (natural) life. And my favourite part ... the realistic way you did Rose and Re-Pete's relationship was about a million times better than all those stories that mention how she "could never call him Dad", etc. in spite of the fact she called him Dad three or four times in Doomsday!

Does need a bit of work, and a really good beta. I can't even begin to imagine why the word "Moments" is spelled with a capital letter, and it should be "Mum" and never, ever "Mom". But in general, this was very interesting and I'm glad to have seen it. ;)

[earth_defender]

The Mom/Mum thing is my Mom's fault. She's always called herself Mom so I suppose it is just a habbit writing it that way. And moment, that it because it changed mom to Mom and I guess it changed moment too.

And the Rose Pete part. She only refered to him as Pete when she wasn't supposed to let him know he was her father.

On the whole glad you seemed to enjoy it.

[dynapink]

Well, that's interesting -- do you have an American mother as well? I'm half-and-half and was the only kid in Taunton who said "Mommy" -- caught hell for it, too.

And YES! regarding Pete. That's what I liked about your story ... she was calling him Dad all through Doomsday and yet every.damn.fanfic has her calling him Pete and it irritates the hell out of me.

[steerpikesister]

this was lovely, beautiful and great.

[earth_defender]

*grins* Thanks.

[wiccagal_1996]

Im a bit speechless over here...
BRAVO
Very IC and very touching.
x

[earth_defender]

*hugs*

Thanks a lot. It's my first attempt at a really LONG fiction and I really liked it.

[diablo_dancer]

Lovely! Absolutely brilliant! :D

[earth_defender]

*bounce bounce*

Thanks.