Libra

[e313]

TITLE: Libra
AUTHOR: e313
SPOILER: the end of s3 for SPN
RATING: PG
SUMMARY: give and take
FEEDBACK: as you wish.
DISCLAIMER: No ownership. No profit. Damn.

Dean’s been running for a while now. He’s not sure how many minutes that ‘while’ translates into, but it’s enough for his lungs to have started burning, which is irritating. Damn demon,

Comments

[ultraviolet9a]

I'm loving this. Loving this so much. Because you say it's set after season 3 and you have Dean moving about and the all day slowly unfolds nad you're thinking "what the hell is happening?" and then comes the end and WHOMP! BEYOOOTIFUL. And THEN the title makes sense as well. (figured you'd use your starsign *wink*)

But dude. You need to check your formatting. If you look at paragraphs you'll see how some have smaller fonts than others. Also watch your spacing and some spelling mistakes, like cap instead of cup and impala instead of Impala. Minor objection to the 'lad' you have Bobby using. For some reason i can't hear him say it, at least this often.

Loving your new layout as well.

[e313]

*stares lj* every time i think i have it straight it goes weird on me. i have no idea y the size of the bloody letters wavers. i set it all through the text as the same. then i post. then it shows like this *sigh* *kicks at it* *whines*

[ultraviolet9a]

Nice setting. Be aware that lj supposedly upgraded a while back, which means that at least in my case it fucked up my ljcut and stuff. Now i do everything by html code.