[Fic] After the Battle: Day 2

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Title: After the Battle: Day 2
Fandom: Marvel
Characters: JP=Bobby
Prompt: Charity 7_sins_virtues
Rating: PG
Summary: Bobby is injured. Jean-Paul visits again.
Author's Note: This is again in my Bobby=JP AU, and the semi-sequel to After the Battle.

Comments

[fullmetal_cute]

*dies of the giggles* Adorable, absolutely adorable!

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XD I got the idea in my head, but it didn't gel until the "How stupid do I look?" line. Because the Bobby in my head is a little ... not quite vain, but conscious of his image, even though he doesn't show it.

[surfer_yuun]

your icon is full of win! Men in tights rocks!

[train_diskense]

*giggle-fit* I can see the dragon, mainly because I used to have a stuffed dragon JUST like the one you described. It was greenish and blueish and squishy.

......The Do-NotDisturb sign amused me to no ends.

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You have one? Really? I've never actually seen one, although I imagine it in my head.

Well Hank's not going to give up an opportunity for mischief, especially if if involves embarassing Bobby >D

[train_diskense]

I used too. ;___; Don't have it anymore. No idea what happened to it either.

No, because that would be entirely out of character for Hank. : D

icon love

[train_diskense]

Your icon is.....BADASS!!! It's just so amazing..... I can not express my love enough....
-Ketami

[burnt_pidgeons]

Squeee! My momkept asking what was so funny 'cause I Laughed out loud. -snicker- Yeah, I don't think she'd appreciate this...

Butbut. YAY. Awesome fic. Very, very amusing. -giggle-

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*lol* Yeah, I don't think that moms woudl really approve of this kind of stuff. But the ones that do are super cool, don't you think?

And I'm really glad that it amused you! That's my goal as a writer! To provide amusement and interest and, perhaps, a little insight into life =3

[hybridhelen]

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE, sequel, YAY!

So adorable. Your smirky yet concerned JP and poorly and pouty Bobby are just so adorable. Another fic full of d'aaawww and giggles. *claps hands and jumps up and down, like the overexcited child she clearly is*

I really like the tangent about Emma having to allow the dragon in her classroom. I LOVE that you used 'moue' - just so right for the kind of face JP would pull.

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The picture of JP in my head is almost always smirky, no matter that he's supposed to be a concieted Canadian snoot XD; He also tends not to use contractions, although why, I have no idea.

Emma would like to note that she will one day get that little kiddy and his little dragon too. She just needs to wait for the next camping trip to the boonies...

[hybridhelen]

In my head, too, JP is almost always smirky - he's better than us, knows it, and knows that we know it, too. Or something like that. Although the smirking is also useful as a cover up for the (rare) times that he doubts his own magnificence.

Contractions...maybe because he is too much of a perfectionist? Not that contractions are wrong/lazy, but maybe they are less than exact (...go with me on this...) and JP prefers to be precise? Gah, I have no idea what I mean here...

Emma would like to note that she will one day get that little kiddy and his little dragon too. She just needs to wait for the next camping trip to the boonies...
"I'll get you my pretty, and your little dogdragon, too!" ? Oh noes *er, scrolls up page to check name*, Benjamin, run away! Run while you still can!

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Now that I think about it, Jean-Paul isn't a born English speaker. His first language is Quebequois-French. Because of this, he probably started off not realising that contractions were even possible. Then, of course, he just became a grammar-snob XDD

Benjamin's a cutie, honestly, and he's got some nice backstory to him! Plus, he's cooler than Dorothy because he's got a dragon, not a dog. That's got to count for something.

[lux_apollo]

*smirks* Nice.

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Thanks!