[TF] Hunt and Seekers

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Title: Hunt and Seekers
Fandom: TF
Characters: The OxyMorons (OCs)
Rating: PG-13 for violence
Summary: Bait the trap, catch the prey and dispose of it accordingly.
AN: Blargh. Violent psychopaths finally show how violent they can be.

Comments

[pax_athena]

Ouch... That was a hard one.
Good written, I like the different characters of the Trine-members... (But I also know why I stick with the 'bots *lol*)

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Heh. Well, they're Decepticons and not only that, but they were /created/ as Decepticons. I think it would do something strange to a person's psyche if they knew that from the very beginning of their life... and I totally understand why you'd stick with the 'Bots XD

I'd side with 'em too in a war... but I find Cons to be more interesting to write. Their issues make 'em interesting!

[akisawana]

I like Ashburner, don't get me wrong, but the femmes have such depth.

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Yeah, in this fic, Ashburner gave me such /problems/. Seriously, the bugger wouldn't let himself be written. I need to work with him more, I think, because I've not got as good a handle on his character as I do on the femmes and, unfortunately, it shows really obviously. >>;

But I'm glad you like the girls ^^ I love Shriek so much. So. Much.

[akisawana]

I wanna hug her. She's so damn /cute/!

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Actually, hugging her might end up with you being slashed to bits. Because she's not only adorable, she's also deadly XDDDDD

However, I'd be glad to stand with you and squee far, far away from her =3

[zangetsugirl]

Reading your pet psychopaths appears to have woken mine. Excuse me a moment while I put them back on their leashes.

...

There. Back to the fic. LOVED this. Seekers make GOOD hunters, yes they do. I think Shriek was my favorite, although I don't think you wrote Ash nearly as badly as you think you did. I liked their system: Morn culls the prey from the herd, Shriek brings it down and Ash disposes of it. Very nice.

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Psychopaths really do call out to each other XD Maybe we should have them play together sometime. Goodness knows that my OCs run along with Streaky all the time... I don't see why I couldn't take 'em for a spin with yours? =3

I think everyone likes Shriek. I'm not sure why, really. She's angry all the time and she doesn't talk at all and she's all sharp edges and scowliness. XD;

Also: I'm glad that you liked Ash. The little bugger irked me. It's hard figuring out how to write him because it's from his POV, which means that I can't use the big words like "the purification of the defiled creature before him made Ash smile". Just doesn't work that way. >/

*heh* Man, didn't think of it that way, but you're right. It is a very pack-predator kind of hunting system..... Cool <3

[zangetsugirl]

*laughs* Mine are all Bleach at the moment, so I don't think it'd work very well with the particular universe you've got going here.

These are reasons NOT to like her...?

*pats* I feel your pain with the word choices. It's a bitch. You really did do well, though.

[dytabytes]

I could pull mine into your Bleach/TF Crossover? These guys are movieverse anyway X3

Well... this is true XD

Thanks, you have no idea how happy that makes me!

[clankclankboom]

Not quite sure how, but I managed to miss this set. Damn they're cool. Though, I think I may be the odd one out here in having a preference for Ashburner. This sounds weird, but Morningstar seems quite American, Shriek seems heavily cybertronium and Ashburner seems a little bit English. (Weird - I know they're all 'cons but I dunno, something resonates there.)

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... Okay, I admit it. Ash's got a British accent in my head. It's really, really weird because he sounds so cultured, but he's talking like some sort of heathen all the time. >>;

[systemscrash]

I love how intense these three are... NNGH. LOOK AT THEM. You totally made me love Ashburner with a fiery passion with this, though. For god's sake he set the guy on fire with his own tire. That's awesome.

And again. You make me robogay for Morningstar. She's so conniving and evil and just fapfapfap.

(You make my own two OCs look like a total wasteoids. Though you make me want to play with them again.) BLARGH STOP BEING SO AWESOME.

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=D YAY! Yeah, I actually got the inspiration of that from the practice of 'necklacing' that people used to really practice. Take the person you hate out back, throw a gasoline-soaked tire around their neck ans light it off... it makes me really, really sick to think about it, but on the other hand, it seems like something right down Ash's alley >>;

Morningstar is the uber!evil. Seriously, her colour scheme's shiny black with matte black with red eyes and a red crest thing XD

Aww, don't be that way! I'm sure they're SUPER COOL! Heck, if you want, I'm always up for crossovers, so if they're TFs or characters that'd be able to interact with TFs, feel free =3

[systemscrash]

I've heard of that, and yeah, it makes me sick to my stomach too. But generally, I can block most of that stuff, so it's all good? All I know is that it suits him quite well. The fact that he was so calm about it was the icing on the cake. Ashburner gives me great lulz

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Ashburner = really, really awesome when he's around fire. Seriously, it doesn't matter who or what it is; it if burns things, he's humping it and loving it and making it /his/. If he ever meets the Human Torch, he's gonna joygasm right there, the little perverted psychopath >>;

In a way, I guess? I've got a coloured chibi that I really only made so that I could get her in my head? I'll put 'em up in a post some time XD She really /could/ be a Megatron. It's actually... well, there's something I'm plotting involving powers behind the throne and all that wonderful stuff >>

Ooh, I'm intrigued =3 We should definitely have playtime XD I mean, Morn would just ignore 'em, but Ash might have some interesting interactions with Mr. Alcoholic XD And SHAAAAAAAAAARE <3

... thank you. You are too <3