[TF] Five Times Ratchet Blew Up (Part 1)

[dytabytes]

My f-list's already seen two thirds of this, so apologies to you who had a sneak peek! They have been editted slightly, though, so they should be a little better in certain aspects. I'll be posting these one at a time with a few edits to the open public. I hope they're enjoyable!

Title: Five Times Ratchet Blew Up (and One He Didn't)
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*snerk*

Wheeljack loves teasing Ratchet, I think, but he considers his tinkering as SRS BSNS ... the LULZ are just a side-benefit XD

[cinderburster07]

Mwhahah! That was awesome. 'Jack totally deserved that noggin' bonkin', oh yes. Kudos for having him doing self-modifications. ;)

The only thing I saw that you might wanna fix is:

"Well, the welder does emit busts of concentrated electricity to produce heat, so I suppose so?"

Busts should be bursts, yes yes?

[dytabytes]

Although he's quite possibly the cutest engineer ever, Wheeljack, I find, always deserves the noggin' bonkin' ^^;

*headdesk* Yes. Thank you so much for pointing that out! I hate it when I miss things like that. It drives me up the wall, but spellcheck and grammar check don't catch those (and neither do I when I'm sleep deprived)

Feh.

[cinderburster07]

Haha! My vote'd go to 'Jack if there were a "Cutest Engineer" contest. XD Yes, yes he does. But we could argue that it's the noggin' bonkin's that give him the good ideas.

Ugh, I know how that goes. I do the same thing all the time. At least you just dropped a letter. ^^; Sometimes I write an entirely different word than the one I was thinking. O_O

[dytabytes]

Totally. I mean, screw the rest of 'em. Wheeljack'd out-engineer MacGuyver if he had a head-to-head. Because he uses logic, not movie!magic XP (not that his logic's sane, but it is frighteningly effective...)

Heh, yeah, thing is, I tend to catch the ones where there's an entirely different word, so those are weeded out... it's the letter dropping that kills me -_-;

Also... I think you're going to enjoy the next installments of this fix ;D I'm a big Wheeljack fan and it ... shows ... *eheh*

[mmouse15]

Well, I like this!

I'm going to guess that the one time Ratchet didn't blow up was when someone kissed him just as he was about to blow up.

I love Wheeljack in this! LOL about the tinkering - it just seems to be his character to be constantly tinkering 'to make it better'. This is great, and I'm looking forward to more! I love Ratchet...

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Thank you!

I'm not responding with a yes or no to the guesses... but I will say that you're on the right track =D

*g* I'm glad you like Wheeljack! I just can't see him and Ratchet apart. They're such a cohesive unit.

[clankclankboom]

That would be super-awesome if it was along the right track. Hummmm .... I'm guessing that 'Jack might possibly be involved there. I'm also guessing that it wasn't actually Wheeljack he was going to get pissed off at (for once).

It's a good OTP. I don't nessacerily see that their relationship has to be sexual (though it can be) but they seem to be just together. In any and all senses of the word.
ClankClank

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I do like them as an OTP, but really, I feel thw same way as you in that, whether or not their relationships romantic or platonic doesn't matter to me. They've just got this sort of aura that amps things up to a million times better when they're interacting.