and we'll be thieves

May 03, 2010 14:37

and we'll be thieves
yunjae, g
romance
727 words

if he could, he would wrap you in his words and spin you a world so real you’d never want to leave.
we’ll be runaways in the night, he says. can't you just imagine it? )

p:yunjae, fic, dbsk

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poppy_sky May 4 2010, 05:22:13 UTC
I loved it, even though as you said, some parts were not that coherent LOL. But they were pieced together quite beautifully.

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dystopialights May 4 2010, 05:32:07 UTC
ahaha, thank you :'D i did have a whole backstory for it, but... it just didn't seem to have a place here. i'm glad you could enjoy it as is :)♥

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poppy_sky May 4 2010, 05:33:48 UTC
Oh well, sometimes you gotta omit some bits here and there :)

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dystopialights May 4 2010, 05:42:04 UTC
indeed~ i guess this could also be considered an exercise in omission and short-fic. i tend to have trouble with that :'D

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vaguelynormal May 4 2010, 08:13:35 UTC
i love this idea so much <3

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dystopialights May 5 2010, 07:09:34 UTC
thank you! ♥

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tea_andteddies May 4 2010, 15:04:01 UTC
its beautiful. the incoherence is only part of its beauty.

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dystopialights May 5 2010, 07:09:55 UTC
thank you so much :D

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obsidianinks May 4 2010, 16:11:29 UTC
Lovely use of adjectives, simply a feast for both my senses and my imagination~ (^_^) loved it! Very vague and mysterious which is actually the way I like it best... :)

I'll be looking out for more from you... *hugs* ♥

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dystopialights May 5 2010, 07:11:00 UTC
thank you m'dear! i'm glad you liked ♥

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dilovesyunjae May 5 2010, 02:09:16 UTC
wow!

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dystopialights May 5 2010, 07:11:25 UTC
thank you :)

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