gene(ration) loss

[dystopialights]

gene(ration) loss
jaejoong-centric, jaejoong/dbsk; pg-13
drama/angst
5,240 words

But the greatest tragedy of all, she realizes, is that Kim Jaejoong has a beautiful voice... but he was born without a license to Sing.

Comments

[dystopialights]

junsu definitely acted rashly, and if it was one thing i wanted to develop it would have been him and yoochun, in later years. sadly, the fic did not go that way (or anywhere i else i planned it to, haha).

i'm all for the study of genetics as a way to confront diseases, but not when corporations try to infringe upon these studies so blatantly.

thanks for reading :)

[dystopialights]

ah, to that i would say, though junsu definitely felt betrayed by jaejoong, being from jae's pov there could be more to his feelings than jaejoong realized ;) but it's really an open ending at heart, so it's up to you to decide~

[dystopialights]

thank you so much :D♥

[samikitty]

omgggg... this is amazing. *O*

i cried for junsu and i CRIED for changmin. T___T it's all heartbreaking but hopeful and bittersweet and beautiful. *O*

definitely mem-ing~~~ ♥

[samikitty]

also forgot to say that chibi!jaejoong is the most preciousest thing ever in the history of all precious things!!! *O*

[dystopialights]

thank you! writing from a child's perspective is always an interesting endeavor, so i'm glad you liked :)

[jaeluvsme]

this was absolutely amazing.

one of the most original fics i've read. and addictive. i didn't want it to end, like really. you, just &hearts

oh and i feel sad for changmin. and yoochun. and a lil bit for junsu, though i could kill him because he was the one who ratted jae out and made jae's life a nightmare.

[dystopialights]

thank you! ♥ i really tried to a couple new and different things with this, so i'm flattered :)

[wackowacko711]

oh wow. the plot and concept was just amazing <3

i absolutely adored jaejoong as a child and how was talking to aliens.

He sends a message to tell them that Earth is a really cool place and it’s probably lonely in outer- space, so they should come down and be friends with Jaejoong, ‘cause he’s kind of lonely too.

the interaction between yoochun, jaejoong, and junsu was so well writen. and i kind of hated junsu for being so selfish. at first i was like what? why are the police taking jaejoong away when i was reading that part and then i was oh no don't tell me junsu told.

maybe i missed it but did you ever say why changmin was an illegal?

the whole story was so bittersweet but there was always hope <3

[dystopialights]

jaejoong was, i imagine, a very interesting and adorable child, lol. it seemed like something he would think up ;D (and, it's very breifly mentioned in the escape scene, but changmin was Illegal because he could Dream.)

thank you for reading! ♥