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dystopialights

Those Left Behind

Oct 31, 2009 16:22

Those Left Behind
established yoosu, yunjae, (slight) homin; r
supernatural/horror
6,747 words

Even if that sort of magic existed somewhere out there, it wasn't meant for him.
( And behind every face is a story. )

p:yunjae, p:yoosu, fic, p:homin, s:shifter!verse, dbsk

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dystopialights November 1 2009, 01:14:35 UTC

thank you ♥
ah~ i'm glad you caught onto that! but i wrote it with either in mind, whether min was killed on the case, by yunho... it's up to you to decide ;D

yume_no_ato November 1 2009, 01:48:49 UTC

Hello dearest! I'm gonna go read this now, and will be back with a comment on how amazing you are later!

dystopialights November 1 2009, 02:05:07 UTC

haha found it quick did you? XD i didn't think i would finish it anytime soon, but i woke up this morning, and was like. i think i will, lol.
wish you were here ><

yume_no_ato November 2 2009, 01:57:09 UTC

I'm happy to say that this was even more amazing than I expected! XD I thought it was superbly balanced. I felt sorry for them all at some point, yet the story wasn't overly depressing, imo. Kind of shows that even when there's so much bad in the world, there can still be good and happiness. Oh, and I'm so glad you didn't break my OTP. <3

In conclusion, I love this verse, and I hope you'll be writing some more in it in the future. Now I really wanna watch some Supernatural. :)

dystopialights November 2 2009, 04:41:50 UTC

♥♥♥
glad you like bb! and how could i break up the otp? they're Forever Love.

and i was just writing this and was gonna ask when you were coming back and then you walked in the doooorr :D

kurogoma November 1 2009, 03:52:12 UTC

i really liked how you gave a story to each and every persona/face that yoochun took on in the sequel in the valley of...
yunho, changmin and jaejoong could have simply be dismissed as people from his past but you chose to give each of them a history and place in his life albeit all were tragic. i am really glad you did because that gave both parts of your story so much more nuances and layers.

It was a nightmare, and Yunho wished he had never wanted magic, if it had anything to do with this. you alluded to how yunho's possession could have been his own fault, that he called upon a power that went horribly wrong ( ... )

dystopialights November 1 2009, 20:03:45 UTC

thank you so much! i had stories in mind for them when i wrote the first, and originally each was going to be a little drabble, and then... it somehow came to this. so freakin long XD but i'm glad you enjoyed ♥

aitotchideto November 1 2009, 05:13:13 UTC

i. omfg. this. wow. fucking breathtaking.

It was hard, getting over what happened, but they were, they were. So what if it was Jaejoong who pulled them into those old impromptu dances, or Jaejoong who always kissed Yunho first. Life was good, life was good.

it hurts so much but ashfjksdhjkadjg you did a great job ♥

dystopialights November 1 2009, 20:04:28 UTC

thank you bb ♥!

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dystopialights November 2 2009, 04:33:54 UTC

thank you so much! for commenting, and making magyk carousel. i love this genre and having a comm devoted to it is ♥