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FIC: Addict

Feb 25, 2011 17:24

Title: Addict
Author: redcandle17
Pairing: Padma Patil/Gregory Goyle
Rating: NC-17
Prompt: 11. She loves rough sex, but every lover she takes is gentle and unable to match up to her desires. Enter HIM. He was all wrong for her, and the only emotion between them bordered on hatred. But who cares about love when the sex was so amazing...even if it was ( Read more... )

character: padma patil, fic, character: greg goyle, pairing: greg/padma, het, 2011

Comments 14

ncp February 25 2011, 07:09:19 UTC

That was... not hot, and not sexy at all. But it was disturbing and dysfunctional, and extremely well done.

ncp February 26 2011, 01:25:43 UTC

I should probably clarify that the only reason I didn't think it was hot is because I have a MAJOR squick about Death Eaters having sex. If not for that, I'd probably be all over this story.

redcandle17 March 6 2011, 19:16:54 UTC

LOL, no problem. Thanks for commenting.

snegurochka_lee February 25 2011, 12:04:59 UTC

*brainmelt* Oh man, I must respectfully disagree with the first commenter. That hit ALL my buttons. :D I almost don't want it to be dysfunctional! I want them to build some sort of real, trusting relationship, based on awesome hardcore sex. :) You had me from the summary, mystery author, and then the whole way through. Awesome. ♥

redcandle17 March 6 2011, 19:18:07 UTC

Thanks. I'm a romantic at heart so I had to work hard to restrain myself from giving them at least hope of a functional relationship. :p

megacurious February 25 2011, 19:14:42 UTC

So glad someone picked my prompt! I've been checking eagerly every day to see when this would be posted. You did an excellent job with it mystery author! And I also disagree with the first one, it was hot and sexy, and still disturbing and dysfunctional...but I suppose I've been in the same boat as Padma in a sense (of course, I didn't go after an excon...).

redcandle17 March 6 2011, 19:19:10 UTC

Thanks for the awesome prompt. As soon as I saw it, I knew I would write it, although it took a couple of weeks to decide which characters to use.

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redcandle17 March 6 2011, 19:19:28 UTC

Thank you.

katmarajade February 28 2011, 15:45:08 UTC

Oh my gosh, you had me at the pairing! I love a good rare pair and I adore both Padma and Greg, so I had to check this out. I really liked Padma's thoughts and frustrations with the guys who couldn't understand her desires. You explained it well and that's something that I really like in fic, a glimpse into why something that is not necessarily hot for me is hot for the character. Greg is really hot here, and (like snegurochka_lee) I don't want them to be dysfunctional. I kinda want them to work out and have lots of hot, rough sex and not have him be quite as controlling outside of the bedroom. Though, I totally understand that that would defeat the whole purpose of the fic! Hehe! :) An idealistic girl can dream though. This has made me crave Goyle/Padma fic like mad now! Oh, and the "Ravenclaw bitch, actually." made me laugh out loud! Perfect.

redcandle17 March 6 2011, 19:22:04 UTC

Thanks for commenting. My sympathies are actually with Goyle in this fic. He's being clingy, not controlling. He'd love to have a girlfriend like Padma, but she only wants him for one thing so he's just trying to get as much of her as he can.