Fic: Last Night

[sassy_cat]

Title: Last Night
Author: eevilalice
Pairing: Draco/Hermione
Rating: NC-17
Prompt: 419. After fulfilling Character A's most fantasized sexual desires, Character B cannot look him/her in the eye.
Content Information/Warnings: dubcon, role-playing, rape-play or fantasy, choking/breathplay, bondage, rough sex, angst
Summary: After a night indulging a long-

Comments

[youcantseeus]

Okay, I don't usually read Draco/Hermione like at all but when I saw that summary I decided to click on it and I loved this dysfunctional take on the pairing. Not enough HP fics in general deal with the pureblood/muggleborn privilege dynamics and I loved that you tackled that here in a way that was very much tied to sexuality. And I liked your Hermione and how you weren't afraid to give her issues. Great fic!

[eevilalice]

I was soooo nervous about tackling the dynamic you mention, so I'm grateful for your comment. And I love a Hermione with issues, so thanks!

[snegurochka_lee]

Oooh! Very nicely done! I clicked madly from the prompt and summary, and I really love how you handled this. I love that the scene itself isn't shown, just snippets of it the next day. I think that was a good choice. And it's so perfect that it's this scene, summing up all the challenges this pairing already has and throwing them into stark relief. Great job!

[eevilalice]

Thank you! I was unsure about my choice to abbreviate the opening scene, so that's reassuring. I'm glad you liked it!

[sabethea]

oh, this is sad and devastating and beautiful all at once. *winces*

[eevilalice]

*winces with you* That's what I was going for, but there was definitely some wincing as I wrote it! Thank you so much for the comment!

[katmarajade]

Oh, crap! That does hurt! Beautifully done. I'm not really a Dramione fan at all, but I was intrigued by this and very much enjoyed it. You really capture some of their biggest challenges and keep their reactions painfully believable. I think I need some chocolate now, and a hug.

[eevilalice]

I wanted to give the characters a hug after this! Thanks for reading despite not generally digging the ship; I'm glad it was believable and enjoyable.

[redcandle17]

This is so painful to read. To bare yourself to someone you love and be rejected really is one of the worst things that can happen. This is the perfect dysfuncentine fic. Bravo, anonymous author, bravo.

[eevilalice]

Thank you so much! The prompt seemed like the essence of the fest; it's the worst thing I can imagine!