FIC: Unspoken: Cigarettes & Alcohol Remix

[featherxquill]

Title: Unspoken: Cigarettes & Alcohol Remix
Author: ???
Pairing: Remus/Sirius
Rating: PG-13
Prompt: 114: The war creeps into their lives slowly, until they both wake up one day and realize they're sleeping with a stranger. Optional Extras: The frustration and uncertainty drives one of them to cheat. Bonus points if it's Remus.
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Comments

[pavlablack]

Thanks for such a lovely review! It's my first remix, and of course I wanted to remain faithful to the original but also offer something new, so I'm glad you thought it worked. And of course, having an awesome story to work with in the first place definitely helped. Thanks again for taking the time to read and comment.

[rewrites24]

Ouch. I enjoyed the original, despite the sad, but if the first one was a punch to the gut, this one kicks you while you're down. I mean all of that as a compliment by the way. You captured the atmosphere of the original perfectly and yet I don't feel like I'm reading the same story twice. Seriously, well done!

[pavlablack]

Thank you so much--I love your analogy. Yes, the original was heartbreaking and I'm so glad you thought I captured its atmosphere as well as offering something new. This was my first remix, and it was a little nerve-wracking because I so wanted to do a good job, so comments like yours are validating and reassuring. Thanks again!

[pavlablack]

Thank you so much for commenting, reccing, and allowing me to remix your beautiful story! I like your analysis of why each would behave the way they did in this situation. Your portrayal of loyal Sirius broke my heart, but in a good way.