FIC: That Awful Mess

[featherxquill]

Title:That Awful Mess
Author: ???
Characters: Harry Potter, Ronald Weasley, Hermione Granger, Lavender Brown, Verity, and Draco Malfoy (in various surprise pairings)
Rating: R
Prompt: film noir
Content Information/Warnings: Major Character Death
Summary: The murder of Ronald Billius Weasley - War Hero, One-Third of the Golden Trio, his brother-in-

Comments

[pavlablack]

Very intriguing, and excellent use of the genre! I loved the way you intersperse what's going on in the courtroom with what's going on in Harry's head regarding the suspects and his own guilt and sadness. Great job building suspense, and the ending was great too--just enough hinting that I think I know what happened, but subtle too. Fantastic job.

[xonceinadream]

Oh my goodness. I can't quite express how much I loved this, especially the ending. Each little hint and everything that happened. Simply superb and I loved how it's written. Great, great work.