FIC: Half-Term Saturday

[featherxquill]

Title:: Half-Term Saturday
Author: therealsnape
Pairing: Minerva McGonagall/Narcissa Malfoy
Rating: NC-17
Prompt: 1950s AU, magical or not. Prim schoolmarm and upper-class mother get together in a constellation worthy of a lesbian pulp novel. Throw a taboo-less Quidditch or lacrosse player into the party or Lucius into the swimming pool for added drama. In

Comments

[therealsnape]

Thanks for the lovely comment!

[minervas_eule]

Besides, they hadn’t had time for it. Mum had been gone for ten minutes, max. Just the time to change. No, whatever made her absent-minded, it hadn’t happened then. ???!!!! Ohhhhhh, I can't recall ever falling into an author's trap like this time *ROFL* .... the two diverging stories before had me wondering, but I did not suspect this :-))

And three cheers for Neville - that's a boy - cheers for Argus to recognize this, as well!

But most of the cheers to the author for such an outstanding, inspired, cross-over and "hundreds of more praising adjectives" story! Thank you sooo much <3 <3 <3
I will not quote my favourite lines because I would not know how to restrict myself: all those little details to make canons meet ;-))

[therealsnape]

I made you fall into my little trap? Marvellous! I'm glad you approve of Neville, though. And of the whole story. Thanks for the lovely comment.

[lyras]

Brilliance! I grinned all the way through - love the reconstructed characterisation of Filch, and the Narcissa's misinterpretation of Minerva, and the quiet, determined build-up to that sex scene, and of course, Neville pushing Lucius into the lake. Excellent work!

[therealsnape]

You have tetleythesecond to thank for dripping!Lucius; she asked for it, and it seemed such an excellent idea.

Thanks for the lovely comment. Glad you liked it.

[therealsnape]

Thank you so much for your comment; I'm glad you liked it. And I did enjoy giving Neville his moment in the sun. Or rather, in the pool.

[spin_84]

I don't think a paragraph (heck, make that sentence) went by without a smile or nod in acknowledgement to both your telling of this story and the way the known HP universe was woven in.

This is a fabulous tale - one that I'm about 80% certain of knowing who the author was. Of course that naturally means I'm way off the mark, but I do so love the guessing game.

Right, I shall be reading this again when I have more time to appreciate it all (starting with Madam Scrimgeour and her ruddy cheeks!). So many lines had me beaming or even laughing at, so a hearty well done to you Mystery Author for my enjoyment of this piece! ;-) S. Xx

[therealsnape]

And did you get the author right?

I'm so glad you enjoyed this piece!

[spin_84]

No!!! I was wrong - well, at least who I was referring to when I originally read this. Do I say who I thought it was then?

On second perusal I had my suspicions that I had made a mistake, which made me wonder who it could have been. It was then that your name presented itself and paraded around my mind.