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dyrne_keeper

Fic: Letter to a G.I. (4/6)

Feb 25, 2013 15:20

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kaypgirl February 27 2013, 07:45:10 UTC

I think you may have forgotten to post this to kurt_blaine. I didn't see it there. Great job, as usual.

dyrne_keeper February 27 2013, 12:34:27 UTC

It's up on the K-B comm now; scheduled entries are my nemesis. And thank you!! :D

tanzmaeusi February 27 2013, 12:52:35 UTC

This has been such a wonderful chapter again, so romantic and intense. I always had a feeling that Blaine must have had a troubled, hurtful past concerning his previous relationships and I'm totally happy that he opened up about it and let Kurt see his insecure and needy side. And both " I love you" moments have been absolutely perfect, I felt their deep and true connection in these moments even before they said the three little words, the build up has been so honest, real and intense, the declaration of love just came so natural and easy then, absolutely mesmerizing!!

dyrne_keeper February 28 2013, 15:24:16 UTC

Thank you! Both of these pairs have put a lot of work into their respective relationships, and everyone comes to those relationships with skeletons and demons of their own. It's fun and satisfying (even for me!) to see that pay off in quiet intense moments like those. I'm so glad you liked it, and thank you as always for reading and commenting! <3

Where to begin... lovesrabbits February 27 2013, 17:15:11 UTC

What a chapter! Every single word has weight...hard, at times, to decipher the meaning of each. Just wants me to dig deeper. But the way you twist and turn the direction these characters take, and the emotions that you intertwine throughout....makes me want it to go on forever. I LOVE that interlude between Brian/David, and their declaration, and how near and yet far that same declaration sounds between Kurt/Blaine in an era when it is now permitted. The juxtaposition between the two time frames is impeccable. This story is one of the best I've ever read.

Re: Where to begin... dyrne_keeper February 28 2013, 15:25:31 UTC

Thank you so so so much! Playing with the two different eras, as it were, was one of the most fun things for me with this fic - there's so much to explore, and I didn't get to half of what I thought would be fun to touch on. I'm so glad you're enjoying it, and thank you as always for reading and commenting! <3

Re: Where to begin... lovesrabbits February 28 2013, 16:54:37 UTC

OK.....if you didn't get to half of what you wanted to touch upon in this story, how about putting it into another??!!! I love your work. I really can't say enough about this fic; it touches on two of my favourite elements in a story, Historical content and emotional content. This story has both in spades. I can actually feel it.

Re: Where to begin... dyrne_keeper February 28 2013, 18:41:37 UTC

Oh, it is tempting...but there is a *theme* to this story, and an arc, even if it only exists in my own head (I hope it doesn't!) and everything, more or less, in this story serves and is based on that theme. Writing this was as much about what to leave out - what not to say, what not to show - as much as what to put in, and that leaves some ideas on the cutting room floor but the final project that much better (I hope!) Of course I never want to say never, but in order to do another story I'd need to find another theme that this sort of setting could serve as well...and at the moment that seems unlikely. That said, this is a wonderful world that's been so much fun to play in, and if an idea does arise... :)

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mardie186 February 27 2013, 18:41:33 UTC

Had to chuckle over the "No sex in the trailers" rule earlier in the chapter. Yeah, Ryan tried that on Glee too. I think that rule's been broken MANY times...Love how naturally Kurt and Blaine's relationship has developed and how now they can't imagine not sharing a bed, a dresser, their innermost thoughts, their love. And looking forward to Burt's visit. Because Burt is always awesome. So glad Kurt was able to help Blaine with the credits song...just pulling together what Blaine had written with what he'd been humming in the shower and Kurt's own impressions. They make a great team. Looking forward to the next chapter.

dyrne_keeper February 28 2013, 15:33:20 UTC

Thanks! For myself, I really love stories where the two love interests have great chemistry but also work really well together (I'm a romantic, what can I say :)) so that was something I set out to try to do here as well - I just love the idea of these two practicing and writing and working together. Burt, is the best, all the time :D Thank you so much, and as always thank you for reading and commenting! <3