Two Weeks

[fountnofthought]

It was 3:37am when his cell phone rang.  He cursed before rolling over and fumbling for the send button.  He was giving her a clock that showed multiple time zones for Valentine’s Day, romance be damned.

She’d been in India for a little over a week, away from him for two, and hardly a day had gone by that she hadn’t managed to call him at

Comments

[melizabeth032]

Loved this like always. :)

[samzgurl]

Another good one!

This may seem random, but thank you for steering clear of the whole unmarried pregnancy storyline thing that keeps popping up. I'm a little weirded out that we seem to be celebrating babies conceived/born out of wedlock. It kind of goes against what Sabrina appears to stand for.

You're a terrific writer! May I ask, how old are you and what else do you write about?

[fountnofthought]

Thanks for the review. I tend to stay very grounded in reality when I write (though I do sometimes enjoy reading the flights of fancy that other writers take us on!), so no babies for the foreseeable future. I think my main reason for not going the wedding and/or baby route is that they both strike me as smart people who are aware of just how young they are and are taking their time with one another. I hope they continue to do so, because the early discovery days of a relationship are great (and great to write about

[samzgurl]

I so agree. Thanks for a lovely storyline. It reads as a really natural scene. Thanks also for avoiding the surprise unmarried pregnancy thing. Good Lord, when did that cocept become romantic?