Gift for housemaid79

[jessicaqueen]

To: housemaid79
From: professor_spork

Title: Foreshadowing
Characters and/or Pairings: Rose/Nine, Rose/Ten
Rating: PG
Warnings: None
Summary: Theirs is a story told out of order.
Betas: marlenanargle and beingfacetious.
Word Count: 2,395

Comments

[jessicaqueen]

I love a non-linear story when done properly, and this just was. And I can’t even tell you how much I love the ending of this. Just... wow.

[froxyn]

I rarely read anything other than Ten/Rose...if it's het, I mean. I'll read any gen...but, that's beside the point.

I read this because it was written for a friend of mine.

And, I gotta say...

I'm really glad that I read it!

Excellent work! :)

[juliet316]

This is fantastic. I love the timey - whimeyness of this.

[housemaid79]

“Primitive. This from the man who flies his time machine with a rubber mallet and a closed fist.”

OMG!!! I can't even begin to tell you how much I LOVE this! From the quotation at the beginning (brilliant) through to the very last line - it's all just gorgeous and perfect! You nailed the characterization and the shifts between Nine and Ten, and between Rose at different ages. It's so sweet (but in a truly-sweet-and-not-saccharin kind of way), and so them.

I just love it! (Seriously, this comment took forever to write because I kept going back to read it again.) Thank you!

[geekymary]

Lovely! I like the bouncing back and forth between Nine and Ten (and the little subtle cues to tell you which one we were seeing), the bouncing through time (which - wouldn't that be how a Time Lord tells a story?). Really got the feel for the characters, too.