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dvshipper

Visions Point The Way

Aug 03, 2009 03:51

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ringgoldgate August 3 2009, 20:59:54 UTC

Confrontation or Not,... That is the question? When things and people get stuck in our heads we do want resolution. We just have to think at what the result will be. Is it to just make ourselves feel better? Is it to make things better? It is to help? It is to punish? Our perspective is so distorted in the middle. Usually is is better to wait a few hours, a few days..... and then see what it looks like.

Great Poem again Ash.... This one I really had to read through a few times to see the meaning and this is what I saw. You made me "think". hehe. *head hurting now* hehe

*hugs* Susan

ringgoldgate August 3 2009, 21:05:07 UTC

OH, just read again..... could be a case of curiosity. The writer wants to know more of the person.... I think that view of it too. hehe.... Don't you love the poems that can mirror a readers mood.... Is it a poem of hope and curiosity.... or it is a poem of frustration.

dvshipper August 4 2009, 05:38:22 UTC

Yes! That's what I was intending. Curiosity. Yep, what we read is almost a reflection of what we're feeling at the time.

lil_jei August 6 2009, 08:27:58 UTC

Wow that first stanza caught me right away. A poster on the brainwall was such a great image. And the 3rd stanza was also pretty captivating from line 1. And leaving words via a pen also a good image. Loved the whole thing...great job.

dvshipper August 6 2009, 10:19:30 UTC

Thanks! Have no idea actually what a brainwall is, it just kind of flowed out. lol. Glad you were captivated. :)