"If you're an angel, where are your wings?"

Mar 13, 2009 14:16


Two new poems!

Up Is Down )

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ringgoldgate March 14 2009, 00:00:28 UTC
Ash, I especially like the second one. To have people in the night, that is so special. The darkness is the scariest time. But to be with someone dear, the stars are that much more breathtaking.

Sorry, I have been isolating away from people. I do seem to hide in my night. :(

*hugs*
Susan

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dvshipper March 14 2009, 00:05:18 UTC
The darkness is definately scary, especially when you're not sure when the sun will actually show itself.

Np, you do what you need to. Just remember that a sunrise is never far away. And if you get tired of waiting, you can always just seek one out. *hugs*

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cgf_kat March 14 2009, 04:27:59 UTC
Those are both beautiful, dear. :) The second one is so sweet, and the first one speaks to me personally...considering some things that have happened recently. It's so true, too. We can't get on with our lives if we don't confess that something is wrong. Or that's what I get out of it, anyway. And...us not admitting things...it doesn't hold only us back. Doing it myself and seeing others close to me refuse to admit such things...it tears everyone around you apart, too, if we're not willing to admit what's going on and try to fix it. But we have to, no matter how much we want to hold on to our comfort zone. To me the poem captures that perfectly. I love it. *hugs*

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dvshipper March 14 2009, 04:39:49 UTC
Oh thank you. Yes, I agree, only by truly seeing what's going on and accepting and/or fixing it can we move forward. But the problem is not in admitting what's upside down, it's in deciding whether or not to fix it or just carry on. *hugs*

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dvshipper March 15 2009, 03:20:14 UTC
Oh thank you! *hugs*

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