FIC: Three

Aug 15, 2009 19:21

Title: Three
Pairing: Andy/Miranda
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: None.
Disclaimer: So very much not mine. Unfortunately.
Author's Note: So, remember the dvlwears_prada challenge to celebrate the community's third anniversary? Well, I wrote this story for that. Except I had trouble with the middle bit, and just finished it, um, today. *sigh* Anyway, hope you enjoy ( Read more... )

pairing: andy/miranda, rating: pg-13, all: fiction, challenge: good things in three, length: one-shot, user: jackiejlh

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tanama30 August 16 2009, 00:45:05 UTC
nice story i loved it. great job

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jackiejlh August 16 2009, 00:55:32 UTC
Thank you!!

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law_nerd August 16 2009, 02:40:19 UTC
Worth waiting for!

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radak August 16 2009, 03:55:22 UTC
nive!

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seelyfey August 16 2009, 05:42:36 UTC
I've always loved it when Miranda is unable to say what she means and mean what she says. The dichotomy you've sketched out between thought and action are so compelling and really give a great portait of Miranda as a person. I especially loved the stilted-ness of her and Andy's conversation. Its real and awkward but there.

My favorite was when she Miranda talks about how before Andy she didn't have to pretend like former assistants didn't exist. In one simple line you really gave us how incredibly difficult Andy's effect on Miranda has been. You apply the "show me, don't tell me" rule of writing beautifully.

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styx63 August 16 2009, 09:39:26 UTC
Nicely done. I really liked the third (lol) paragraph and how she thinks that three is a cursed number.

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