When the Night Falls on You: Chapters 14 and 15

Apr 22, 2009 20:17

Title: When the Night Falls On You
Author: Fewthistle
Fandom: Devil Wears Prada
Pairing: Miranda/Andrea
Rating: PG/R
Chapters: 14 and 15/?
Words: 4,981 (24,527 for chapters 1-15.)
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status: incomplete, rating: pg, pairing: andy/miranda, all: fiction, user: fewthistle

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kdsusa3 April 23 2009, 00:41:01 UTC
Awesome chapter. I love how you are building the relationship between Andy and Miranda.

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fewthistle April 23 2009, 01:13:48 UTC
Thanks so much for always taking the time to read and comment. I truly appreciate it!!

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anonymous April 23 2009, 01:02:43 UTC
I really wasn't expecting that political answer from Andy. Voting for the lesser of two evils sounds just as apathetic as not voting at all. I'd rather rally for a third party/independent candidate I believed in or protest what's the government has been doing all together than that. And a war for oil? Please. How cliche.

Still a really nice story you've got going here though.

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fewthistle April 23 2009, 01:13:14 UTC
LOL. Honestly? Well, not exactly the type of comment I expected.

It's a fanfiction story, not a platform for my political beliefs. Nor quite the appropriate forum for an in-depth analysis of the reasons behind our engagement in Iraq. And cliches are really only a sin in literature. This isn't literature. It's a DWP fic, Anonymous.

Still, thank you for the compliment. I'm glad that some of it appeals to you. Thanks for taking the time to comment. :)

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somniesperus April 23 2009, 02:17:32 UTC
Leaving critical comments anonymously is pretty cliche, too.

fewthistle, I especially enjoyed the way you described Emily as both empty BB gun chamber and sponge. Poor Emily. And it's always good to see Andy and Miranda actually talking about something of substance, like actual grown-ups (go figure). Thanks for this.

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fewthistle April 23 2009, 20:53:11 UTC
I know it was simply on principle, but thanks for having my back on that *g*.

And thank you for the generous words. I must say, praise from you, as the woman who truly owns DWP, is heartily appreciated. Nice to hear that you feel I am getting this even partially right. New fandoms are always challenging and it is lovely to get words of encouragement from writers whose work I admire. :)

Thanks again!!

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raventat April 23 2009, 01:44:47 UTC
Another great update! And I thought the political bit was hilarious. Reminded me of a conversation I had in Spanish class when I utterly insulted someone by calling her a republican (unfortunately it was true) alas--memories.

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fewthistle April 23 2009, 20:53:53 UTC
Thanks so much! It just seemed like a fun, interesting topic for a conversation. Glad you enjoyed it!

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perks123 April 23 2009, 01:49:27 UTC
Wonderful update...really enjoyed reading it.
Thanks for posting.

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fewthistle April 23 2009, 20:54:23 UTC
Thank you, for always being so kind and taking the time to comment!

Cheers!

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fewthistle April 23 2009, 20:57:32 UTC
You are always so lovely and generous and detailed in your compliments, and I am, as ever, in your debt for the kind words. I'm so pleased that you enjoyed those parts and that the storyline and dialogue is working for you.

I can't imagine that Miranda could keep sane without a sense of humor, so it was fun to play with that. And no, I don't imagined that Miranda would be changed too drastically by much of anything. I'm so gald you like this.

Thanks again!!

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