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New fic: in the deep

Sep 25, 2011 14:39

DWP fanfic: in the deep
by Politic X

Pairing: Miranda/Andrea
Rating: M
Status: Completed
Word count: 13,400
Chapters/web pages: 1
Disclaimer: The Devil Wears Prada is not owned by me; I'm not making money.
Archive: Ask first
Also posted to ff.net
Beta: Many thanks to the bewitching sheknowsnofear, a little daily miracle.

Summary: Miranda is looking for a ( Read more... )

pairing: andy/miranda, rating: nc-17, all: fiction, user: politic_x

Comments 37

nore1 September 25 2011, 21:18:22 UTC

God your stuff is just so good! The tension was unprecedented - possibly the best Mirandy read I have ever found! Enlightning! Thank. You.

Nore

politic_x September 26 2011, 00:03:58 UTC

Oh gosh, thank you so very, very much! I worked quite hard on it. Thank you. :) Laura

chilly_flame September 25 2011, 21:36:24 UTC

I don't know why it is, but it is always such a relief and a pleasure to read stories from you. Amazing insight and quality, plus great intellect, emotion, and eroticism is just fantastic. Although Miranda expected shallow water, I never do in your work and this was no exception. I love how Miranda felt so in control, as though she were directing things, only to move wherever andy wanted her to be. Also loved that the end, she recognized this exact fact. Sigh. Wonderful stuff.

politic_x September 26 2011, 00:11:33 UTC

Oh, chilly. You know what I forgot to add in my header? I wrote this from your prompt in that ficathon thingie... a prompt that was something like 'margarita night'. Somebody else posted before me and their story was so good I put this one aside and quit writing it for a couple of months... Thank you for your generous comments. I turn to your fics with the same feeling, so I know exactly what you mean (and it makes me grin). Looking forward to what you have on tap hopefully soon... Laura

chilly_flame September 26 2011, 00:48:08 UTC

Oh happy day that my prompt inspired such goodness for us all to enjoy! I am truly gratified, and this was a marvelous piece to answer it. (I had no memory of that prompt until you mentioned it.) What a great surprise. :D

PS: chainofclovers' feedback always points out something insightful that I didn't read the first time--I look forward to a second read thinking about the very things she mentioned so eloquently.

mayireadtoday September 25 2011, 21:49:03 UTC

Great lines: "These days, she escorts me everywhere. I suspect I could ask her to the Met's gala next week as my date, and she wouldn't bat an eyelash."

Awesome: "A few years ago Nigel and I had an eye-opening conversation in which he insisted that I need a wife. A young woman to fuss over you and take care of you at home. Someone to be there waiting for you. Raise your children. Someone you can dress up."

I adore this mature Andy.

Beautifully done.

I really hope in real life you're a successful writer because you deserve it.

politic_x September 26 2011, 00:20:29 UTC

Aw, thank you so much! From your lips to the publishing industry's ears! Well, that would take me putting my realfic first, when Mirandy has stolen my attention. But thank you for your kind praise. :) Laura

mayireadtoday September 26 2011, 01:09:39 UTC

You're welcome.

jah728 September 25 2011, 22:57:07 UTC

Outstanding story. Very, very well written. The pacing was perfect.
Thanks for the read.

politic_x September 26 2011, 00:55:43 UTC

Thank you so much! The pacing / flow is one of those areas that I really needed to work in a specific way, what with Miranda's repetitions, so it's good to hear that it worked for you. :) Laura

raiderl September 25 2011, 23:36:29 UTC

Beautiful, in the manner of a stumbled upon gift from nature; the inner part of a shell, that deepest color in the sky at twilight or the myriad colors revealed in a swell of a wave as it catches first light. Lovely!

politic_x September 26 2011, 00:57:53 UTC

Oh now that's beautiful. Thank you for the lovely compliment. :) Laura