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lady_orlean in dvlwears_prada

Short Fic: It's not what it looks like

Jun 09, 2011 01:39

It’s not what it looks like

She doesn’t know you’re back. Not yet.

You did your best to enter your home quietly. You are supposed to be back a few days later. You love to surprise her.

You smile when you imagine her at the airport, eagerly waiting for your return, running to you, jumping on you body, kissing you senseless. Like she always does ( Read more... )

user: lady_orlean, all: fiction, pairing: surprise, genre: pwp, rating: r, length: one-shot

Comments 31

sanditar June 9 2011, 01:55:36 UTC

Awesome. I really liked it :)

lady_orlean June 9 2011, 11:17:47 UTC

Thanks, I'm glad you think so.^^

flyhiwithme2 June 9 2011, 01:57:54 UTC

Whew! I thought Miranda was coming home and would find Andy "cheating" on her. I'm so relieved it was Nate, haha. I am so evil, poor Nate really didn't do anything "that" bad to Andy in the movie, but I love when Andy leaves him for Miranda in all the dwp stories. I do feel a little guilty for enjoying it so much, but this was great.

lady_orlean June 9 2011, 11:21:07 UTC

*lol*
I know what you mean.
I don't like Nate either, but I can't hate him. He's just "le boyfriend".

No, I could never NEVER let Andy or Miranda cheat on each other in my stories. I just CAN'T. I'm such a romantic sucker. Once together, always together. Only death will part them.
(except their boyfriends/husbands/whatever)

Thanks for reading. 8)

petitenenette June 9 2011, 05:23:21 UTC

So hot and naughty. Beautifully written and I just love the very surprising twist at the end : although always on Mirandy's corner, almost feel sorry for Nate. A sequel would great to know what is Miranda going to do !Thanks !

lady_orlean June 9 2011, 11:23:00 UTC

Thanks. I'm glad you like it. ;)

I don't know how a saequel could work here, but I'll think about it.

goodkitty1331 June 9 2011, 06:58:03 UTC

naughty naughty naughty.....
I thought for second there, It's Miranda who is the voyeur but it turn out to be Nate.
:P
your story short and sassy. well done.
=D

lady_orlean June 9 2011, 11:25:14 UTC

Yeah. I loved writing that twist and carefully avoided every eviodence of the gender with the second person pov.
I'm glad you like it.

Thanks for reading. ;)

writtensword June 9 2011, 08:17:09 UTC

Ahahaha!!! I do not feel sorry for Nate. No, no, no. I do not!! xD

I'm sorry, but Nate is a Jerk in the movie, so although I do not condone cheating, I think he hda this one coming! :D :D teehee!

Very hot! Mirandy phone sex! :D

lady_orlean June 9 2011, 11:27:38 UTC

Ahahaha!
I did not expect any other reaction from YOU! XD

I know you hate him. And well, I understand it, although I just can't be too cruel to him.
Although this is really cruel, so..... It's enough. *gg*

Yeah, I love hot Mirandy phone sex. Can't get enough. *blush*

writtensword June 9 2011, 13:25:46 UTC

Teehee! Well maybe I don't really hate him... I hardly ever hate anyone. But he's a stupid jerk! His first line of the movie is to insult Andy's looks, and he's condescending, and never supportive, and he's selfish, and he's that typical guy... you know... with the blue eyes that make straight girls swoon and forgive him every indiscretion, all he has to do is give that droopy puppy look... Makes me just wanna punch him. xD LOL!

But blueballing him is fine too. ^_^

lady_orlean June 9 2011, 21:13:40 UTC

*lol*

Yeah, but I think it's just because he can't understand the change of Andy.
She had made fun of all the Runway clackers and so on, even of Miranda with Nate and her friends.
Of course he can't understand that she suddenly learns more about the world she was formaly mocking over and got more fascinated by Miranda.

It is a typical guy thing.
So I can't blame him. *gg*