Nigel's Ballad

Jun 06, 2010 12:20

Summary: Nigel’s last day/moments at Runway before taking over Jacqueline Follet’s recently vacated position at Holt Enterprises.

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user: mirandaminerva, all: fiction, rating: r

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associatedbears June 6 2010, 11:45:10 UTC
Bravo. Beautiful work. I can see this all unfolding in my mind's eye as you write it.

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mirandaminerva June 7 2010, 18:13:26 UTC
Kamsahamnida (Thank you muchly.) :)

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jintymac June 6 2010, 13:38:30 UTC
This was so beautifully written, I absolutely loved it ;-)

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mirandaminerva June 7 2010, 18:15:39 UTC
Ah, shucks. Thanks for the kind words, eh? ;)

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mxrolkr June 6 2010, 15:08:05 UTC
That was absolutely Breathtaking. Wonderfully done. My heart both broke and soared for Nigel. Just, wow, just glorious.

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mirandaminerva June 7 2010, 18:19:49 UTC
Oh, I like the sound of that (heart both broke and soared) !! I find Nigel to be intriguing - his ability to successfully work with MP and at the same time maintain a sense of self. (Thanks for the review!)

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xenavirgin June 6 2010, 19:04:26 UTC
Wow! I really enjoyed this. It was sad, but not veering into true angst. And well written with absolutely excellent characterisation. Well done!

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mirandaminerva June 7 2010, 18:30:49 UTC
It was a purely happenstance tap into Nigel's voice. Your comments are high praise. Thank you.

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mayireadtoday June 6 2010, 21:13:45 UTC
Wonderful. This really rang true to me.

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mirandaminerva June 7 2010, 18:33:25 UTC
Most excellent (that it rang true). Thank you for reading (and for the comment!) :)

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