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androgynydelmar in dvlwears_prada

AU/Crack Fic Time After Time Chapter 1

Feb 10, 2010 03:23

( Chapter 1- Time After Time: Tango )

pairing: andy/miranda, all: fiction, rating: r, user: androgynydelmar, genre: crack

Comments 21

gt22 February 10 2010, 09:33:58 UTC

Oh interesting concept I look forward to the rest and how it plays out

Hot dance btw! :)

androgynydelmar February 10 2010, 16:23:16 UTC

Thanks for your fb. I've discovered that it's a little difficult writing a dance scene where you not only have to focus on the steps, but also on the feelings that the moves evoke. Hopefully, I managed to capture some of that. Thanks again :o)

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androgynydelmar February 10 2010, 16:17:34 UTC

Thank you. I'm happy that the genderbending didn't put you off. :o)

michi6877 February 10 2010, 15:06:28 UTC

OMFG!!!! That was a hot and spicy dance scene!! And what a unique concept, I'm just gonna sit here and wait as patiently as I can for your next update. Oh and just for the record I'm loving the idea of Lilly as Lillith and for once her not being a demon/child eater.

androgynydelmar February 10 2010, 16:21:24 UTC

Thank you for your kind fb. I love Lillith as well and never subscribed to the idea of her being some jealous succubus. Hopefully, I can play with her story a bit without having any probs. I'll try to get my 2nd chapter posted ASAP. Thanks again. :o)

michi6877 February 10 2010, 17:05:24 UTC

I also meant to comment about, but my ADOS kicked in. Is that I love the fact that you've no issues having one if not both Miranda and Andy is/are male in past lives. Being intersexed it's nice to see gender playing (as I call it) in stories with my fav pairings. As well as you being such a tease!! And I mean that in the best way possible! *grins*

michi6877 February 10 2010, 17:06:29 UTC

Oh and yer uber welcome, though WE the readers should Thank You for sharing your truly awesome story with us!!

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BRAVO! BRAVO! chamilt6 February 10 2010, 16:28:40 UTC

A wonderful treat. I really enjoyed this, and I hope you continue it! Thanx.

Re: BRAVO! BRAVO! androgynydelmar February 10 2010, 18:50:27 UTC

Thank you very much. I love your Returning Home fic, so I'm especially flattered that you've read and enjoyed mine. Hopefully, I manage to keep your interest. :o)

Tango kali_blue February 10 2010, 16:33:02 UTC

I love a steamy Tango. Thanks for the fabulous visuals. Enjoyed the back through the ages soul mate angle to explain why Andy is still hooked on Miranda. Lily as helpful Lilith a nice change of pace then the tired she's an evil demon just cause she wouldn't put out for Adam. Looking forward to more.

Re: Tango androgynydelmar February 10 2010, 18:53:36 UTC

"...the tired she's an evil demon just cause she wouldn't put out for Adam...."

Oh my gosh, I just burst out with this rather undignified snort when I read that.. the way you phrased that was hilarious!! Yes, I agree that the traditional Jewish perspective on Lillith is rather tiring and anti-fem at that. I am trying to make her a more likable character. Hopefully, I succeed and manage to keep your interest as well. Thanks for the fb. As always, it is appreciated :D

Life in the Garden is idyllic kali_blue February 10 2010, 22:14:25 UTC

I read this wonderful revisiting of Eden a few months ago. Hopefully you will enjoy it, too.

http://xenafiction.net/scrolls/another_author_garden_a_revised_tale.html

As for the Jewish tradition, I wouldn't put the blame squarely on Jewish male scholars shoulders. There is not much in the Torah about Lilith. Most written about her is commentary. Here's a link that covers the origins of how the Lilith demon mythology arose. http://www.straightdope.com/columns/read/1513/whats-the-story-on-lilith-adams-first-wife

Cheers

Re: Life in the Garden is idyllic androgynydelmar February 11 2010, 05:46:50 UTC

Thanks for the links, I'll definitely check them out soon. Regarding Lillith, I won't put the blame for how she's negatively perceived squarely on the Jewish tradition, but most stories of Lillith are traditionally Jewish with little to no mention of her in the Christian church. But I should re-check her origins as I will be writing about her considerably. Thanks for the heads-up, and I apologize for any errors.

H <3