Snippet

[kyanited]

Title: Forsaken
Pairing: MirAndy, Andy/other
Rating: PG?
Summary: Miranda makes a grave mistake.

Comments

[perks123]

I hope what I think happened didn't happen but it probably did. Yuck!

Great job with just a few words.

I know you titled it as a "snippet" but this would be great as an expanded story.

[heart_never]

As sick as it is, that kinda intereques me, to think Andy Fucked/sucked or otherwise that horrible little man to try and save miranda

[mirandaminerva]

Interesting to think about what Andrea would do for Miranda (although this particular idea has me gagging - which, truly, is a sign of how well-crafted and powerful your snippet is).

[associatedbears]

Andy and Irv equals extreme yuck, well crafted.

[vainscheinker]

Is it possible that maybe, I could write a story based on this idea? Could I do that? It would be my first one, but for some reason I would love to use this, to get me started...so could I? Please?

[kyanited]

This came to me while struggling with my own story, and I'm not sure yet to which extent this will go into it. So I'm a bit reluctant as long as I'm not finished with my own.

But I don't want to squelch your inspiration, either... Perhaps you could send me an outline of your idea, so we can avoid collisions?     (kyanited@livejournal.com)

[vainscheinker]

I really don´t have an outline yet, but don´t worry about it. I prefer reading yours anyway, lol. The idea is so disgusting that I thought that would be the ultimate sacrifice for love and I thought that was very romantic. I just really wanted to see this in a story, if after reading yours I think I had something very different in mind, then I´ll let you know and you tell me what you think.
Great short piece, by the way.