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PERSONAL AND PROFESSIONAL (7/7. EPILOGUE)

Jan 07, 2010 00:01

Title: Personal and Professional
Author: dearelphie
Pairing: Miranda/Andrea
Rating: PG
Summary: For the first time in her life Miranda goes to Russian Fashion Week and takes Andy with her.
Disclaimer: I don’t own all these characters.

( Day seven. Epilogue... )

rating: pg, pairing: andy/miranda, all: fiction, user: dearelphie

Comments 10

wiser_dachshund January 6 2010, 21:40:52 UTC

Great ending- I like how you continued so well with Miranda's character- how she still holds out on saying 'I love you'. It's really appropriate, I think.

And I also liked how the end wasn't super mushy, or too 'perfect'...Andy is away, but Miranda still talks with her, still organizes to see her.

Well done.

dearelphie January 6 2010, 22:02:29 UTC

Thank you!
I think Miranda couldn't act differently. Facing the truth Adny was a strange person to her. I mean not her sister or daughter or so. She didn't use to a close communication with such let's say strangers. And everything she's done and said to Andy was really a proof of her particular attitude.
Thanks once again for reading. I'm very glad you liked it.

jintymac January 6 2010, 23:22:26 UTC

I loved the way you ended this story, I thought it was completely in character for Miranda to do what she did about Andy's new job but I'm glad she decided to keep things going with Andy as it's a nice hopeful ending ;-)

dearelphie January 6 2010, 23:30:11 UTC

Thank you very much:))

immini January 7 2010, 01:38:52 UTC

Hi. I really enjoyed the story, and loved the idea of Miranda showing Andy around and sharing herself through experience.

Just one thing, and I apologise in advance if you think I should keep my nose out, but perhaps get a beta or someone to read it through as you're writing it? There are a few syntactic errors, where the words are in the wrong order, and some grammatical, eg. an adverb in the place of an adjective ("absurdly" instead of "absurd") which could be easily fixed. This didn't detract from my enjoyment, but it was a little distracting.

Thanks for updating so quickly! :)

dearelphie January 7 2010, 11:22:14 UTC

Thank you for the comment. I'm sorry for all my mistakes. English is not my native language, so maybe I should really think about a beta next time)

androgynydelmar January 12 2010, 05:24:10 UTC

angsty at the end and very sweet.. but it all worked out very well for them. thanks for writing this. it was lovely :D

dearelphie January 12 2010, 21:00:16 UTC

Thank you for reading. And thank you very much for all your comments=))

punky_96 February 10 2010, 08:15:10 UTC

What a nice story :) Thanks.

dearelphie February 10 2010, 15:52:29 UTC

I'm glad you liked it:)