Valediction by jlrpuck, commentary by fishface44

[fishface44]

[This commentary was actually completed before the others, but it was unfortunately submarined by my initial failed posting efforts.]Valediction

Comments

[earlgreytea68]

I like your insight that this is the opposite of the Nine/Ten adjustment.

Also, jlrpuck really does pick places out for Peter and Rose to live, drawing up plans and stuff. It's adorable. You are right in synch looking up real estate listings. ;-)

[fishface44]

Thank you for reading the commentary! jlrpuck, like you, makes me *see* the places she writes about.