Acceptable Risk (the Slow Build Remix) by darsynia; commentary by vida_boheme.

[vida_boheme]

Title: Acceptable Risk (the Slow Build Remix)
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[amireal]

cut tag please?

[vida_boheme]

Sorry, sorry just in the process of doing this while juggling sick children.

[darsynia]

*incoherent arm-flapping squee*

a) Thank you so much! Multiply that by [a lot] and then double that and you have my gratitude for such wonderful things said!

b) You've managed to ease my mind about any part of this I was worried over! \o/ As someone who failed on her own commentary I am boring, boring, boring, and who has had next to no ability to write (barring, yay, the boon of being able to write something for sheafrotherdon's birthday) for months, this is especially precious

[vida_boheme]

It was a pleasure to do because I love this story. I'm so glad that you liked it and that I (hopefully!) I didn't misinterpret any of your intentions :D I was a little stressed and graceless when i linked to this yesterday but I'm so glad that I did it now <3

[erda_3]

Sweet story, and very nice job with the commentary.

[vida_boheme]

Thank you <3 It is a lovely story, isn't it?

By the way, your icon rocks!

[sgamadison]

Wow! I really loved your commentary here. You really take an indepth look at things and put such a neat spin on it--I find myself wanting to not only read the story but hear more of what you have to say! Excellent job!

[vida_boheme]

Such a lovely thing to say <3 I'm glad that you enjoyed it :D

[darsynia]

<3!

I have fun stuff to say but have to leave for college, where I shall nick wireless and respond to your other post. Here's hoping you'll still be around, but if not, have a great rest of your day! ♥