This was so much fun to read! You picked up a lot of stuff that I seem to have done unconsciously. I love how you equated Dean and Demon!Sam to an abusive relationship, that's exactly how it turned out to be. When I started this story, it was only going to be a time loop of Dean's last day, that he was going to be forced to live that over and over again, having to keep saying goodbye to Sammy. I realized pretty quickly how boring that would be for 20,000 words, and it evolved into Dean actually being in Hell and Sam not really being Sam.
I'm so glad you thought it was fun to read. This is exactly the kind of feedback I wanted to leave when you posted it, so I'm thrilled that I go to do it!!!
That's funny that some of the stuff was unconscious, because it all seemed perfectly orchestrated! :D
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So, thank you very much.
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That's funny that some of the stuff was unconscious, because it all seemed perfectly orchestrated! :D
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