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Things To Do In Denver When You're Dead by Speranza, commentary by Girlnamedpixley

Oct 01, 2007 22:14

Title: Things To Do In Denver When You're Dead
Author: Speranza
Fandom: Stargate Atlantis
Pairing: McKay/Sheppard
Commentator: Girlnamedpixley

( Story with Commentary - 1/2 )

commenter:girlnamedpixley, fic author:cesperanza, fandom:stargate atlantis

Comments 5

gaffsie October 2 2007, 09:19:53 UTC

And from this moment on, until the end of the story, Rodney never thinks of him as “Sheppard” again. From here on out…it’s “John.”

I hadn't noticed that! Thank you for opening my eyes. :)

girlnamedpixley October 5 2007, 01:36:43 UTC

Isn't that amazing? I didn't catch it the first few times either! But once I did, it was like *hand slap to forehead*. She's just THAT good. *g* Subtlety is what makes everything work. :)

erda_3 October 4 2007, 18:51:24 UTC

Your commentary made me slow down and give this a more careful reading, and, gee, I missed a lot of stuff ( ... )

girlnamedpixley October 5 2007, 01:41:09 UTC

--I’m usually all about the first time sex scene. I love first times. I’m a sucker for them.--

Me too. And this really is one of the best.

It is! It's just gorgeous, and quiet, and I always feel kind of like I'm trying to be unobtrusive when I read it. I don't want to distract them!

I don't think I commented on it, but I adore the line where Rodney thinks kissing Sheppard is so good and it's like being in college when you enjoyed just making out because you were never sure if it was going to any further. I love that. Them just being so in the moment.

Isn't if fun to gush with other people? : D

erda_3 October 5 2007, 02:15:32 UTC

Yes, this is one of those stories that drives me crazy because I want to share it with someone who would understand why it's so great. There are so many lines I just love. The making out is such a great image.