'Wireless' by aesc: commentary by sheafrotherdon

[sheafrotherdon]

Title: Wireless
By: HF
Email: aesc36 @gmail.com
Pairing: McShep
Rating/Warnings: NC17; sex, angst
Disclaimers: Not mine. Sci-Fi's.
Advertisements: For wordclaim50 challenge #30, "Missing Scene" (my word is 'find'). Set during 3.10, just after the OTP (One True Phonecall).

Notes: Long-overdue request fic for lilithilien, who wanted McShep!phone sex. Coincidentally, I

Comments

[gaffsie]

I have no idea how useful that was. It was very useful, actually. I've always avoided that fic before (phonesex is so not my thing), but thanks to the commentary I realized that I've been missing out on a really good story. I guess this will teach me not to make assumptions based on prompts.

[dossier]

lovely commentary for a lovely story; you point out all the things that I never see, because aesc's writing just leaves *me* breathless, so caught in the moment, fallen in too deeply to see the deeper implications.