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lalejandra September 14 2006, 02:00:31 UTC
I love this. You did a good job.

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general_jinjur September 14 2006, 02:08:16 UTC
thank you. it means a lot to hear it, as i really did want to do your story justice.

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lalejandra September 14 2006, 02:02:46 UTC
Oh, also:

(John's important stories are all about sex, because he doesn't know that they aren't supposed to be--or because he doesn't know that they can not be--or because he doesn't care. Take your pick.)

OK, to be fair, this one part right here is the narrator talking to the audience.

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general_jinjur September 14 2006, 02:11:04 UTC
wow, the comment i made above totally wound up with the wrong icon. annoying. (it was meant to get the one i'm using here.)(not that it matters.)

this comment was just meant to say:
hah! i knew there must have been a reason i felt like it was ambiguous. (or rather, i was really hoping there was some scrap of reason.)

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anatsuno May 9 2007, 08:50:09 UTC
I read Lale's fic a while back (but I love to revisit) and only stumbled on your commentary today. I must say how delightful it was to read, so, thank you!

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