DVD commentary for lalejandra's Pants on Fire, part 1
I have now officially been working on this commentary forever. I'm not sure exactly why (though I have inklings) but I'm terrified. And I feel like a big moron every time I write something. But I still want to do it, and I love the story. So here goes.
Pants on Fire by lalejandra
(Pants on Fire is part of the Publishing AU, all of which can be found here.) ( Read more... )
Pants on Fire by lalejandra
(Pants on Fire is part of the Publishing AU, all of which can be found here.) ( Read more... )
Comments 2
I think maybe he would make a good father. Not great, but good.
Yes. There are a bunch of bits of this that I haven’t written about John, Ronon, and children.
I pretend this is Chuck the gate tech.
This is Chuck the gate tech! Yay!!
I'm continuing to go with all the asides being the inside of John's head and not narration
You are right. Nothing in here is the narrator speaking to the audience.
I love that he says a-twitter.
ME TOO OMG.
Does John ever do anything that isn't based around his need for attention?
NO.
Okay, that 'sings under his breath in Latin sometimes'? Gets me. In the knees.
That is based on a real life person. She does it all the time.
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apparently i can't be articulate in comments, either. oh well.
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