You never cease to please and surprise. Probably the most well written, insightful, eloquent and comprehensive chapter you have ever written. Thank you for the opportunity to read it.
Now...That was wicked awesome my friend!! I can't WAIT to see how you twist this story out. I know you are not going to make it the obvious "I knew it was you" scene. Wonderful, as always!
What a wonderful comment! Thank you for the kind words. I am pleased that you see progress in my writing style, I have been working to improve myself in this regard since I stated this journey at the end of 2008. I hope to continue entertaining with my writing while continuing to get better at the process.
As for the coming twist? I have something cooking which I hope you'll like.
Thank you! I;m glad you enjoyed this installment. I, too, like this "Boi" Andy. He/she does, however,make personal pronouns a bit of a challenge. *grin* Thank you for reading me and taking the time to let me know your thoughts!
That was a fantastic chapter. Poor Andy having to cope with those women ganging up on him. At least they are both see that the girls need more watching. Andy's about to have a very hard day at the beach
Thank you for letting me know your thoughts. I'm glad you enjoyed this installment. I believe you may very well be on to something thinking that Andy is in for a long day as he visits the beach. I appreciate you're taking the time to read me!
A very delicious dinner with Andre(i), thank you! My first thought about Andrei at the beach was: what will he (she) wear to keep his (her) "identity" hidden while at the beach and not be so uncomfortable and out of place? Probably the least of his (her) worries!
I continue to love love love this story. I hope that it continues to flow for you on the writing end of things so that there is more and soon :) Happy writing! I know it is happy reading for me!
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Thank you for the opportunity to read it.
Now...That was wicked awesome my friend!! I can't WAIT to see how you twist this story out. I know you are not going to make it the obvious "I knew it was you" scene. Wonderful, as always!
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As for the coming twist? I have something cooking which I hope you'll like.
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That was a fantastic chapter. Poor Andy having to cope with those women ganging up on him. At least they are both see that the girls need more watching. Andy's about to have a very hard day at the beach
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Thanks for sharing!
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