Fallen Angel (Part 1 of ?)

[duwinter]

Title: Fallen Angel

Author: duwinterFandom: DWP

Comments

[czallis]

Wow. Dark and gritty indeed. I just hope a way out of all this is found for all three of them and for poor Miranda, drinking herself into a stupor back home. Well done.

[20hearts]

Yes there is angst. I just spent 20 minutes trying to talk the twins out of this. I truly hope the sexual acts don't happen to them. looking forward to the update

[stacks_of_books]

I wasn't sure if I'd read this but you have a way with words. I like what you've done here and the realism is good, real good. I'll read the next chapter as soon as I have a few moments but I just wanted to say what a great begining.

[bsofthewest]

Oh, this is tough.....well, I'm on board for the journey, but my mind is filled with dread!

[icequeen1955]

I do love your work. Not sure how I feel about this Andy but if she is redeemed through the twins that would be good.