Comments | dutchchannie: New SS

dutchchannie

New SS - Back In The Day

Oct 28, 2006 20:20

I'm on a roll! Another story. I like it, hope you will too.

Inspired by this Justin picture :)

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fic short

Comments 8

withoutmaps October 28 2006, 18:48:02 UTC

Oh, that was just perfect! And the last line turned out absolutely amazing! Excellent job :D

dutchchannie October 28 2006, 18:49:26 UTC

:D YAY thank you :D So glad you liked it!!

Last sentence not like death? LOL

dancingmerel October 28 2006, 22:00:05 UTC

Nice girl :D Great job :D

dutchchannie November 1 2006, 16:37:16 UTC

Thanks, mereltje!! Kun je het verdragen de JuC love? hehe

dancingmerel November 3 2006, 12:02:11 UTC

Of course I can!!!!!! :P

dutchchannie November 6 2006, 19:43:15 UTC

hehehe cool!! :D

dany_fatone October 30 2006, 18:17:21 UTC

I loved it! Just loved it!

He smiles wide, and you grin back. He pulls you against him and you snuggle in his embrace. He was your first love, he might just be your last.

This part killed me, just lovely.

dutchchannie November 1 2006, 16:38:02 UTC

Thank you :D I'm glad you enjoyed it!! Thanks for the feedback!