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Ficlet - Reflection

Sep 11, 2008 13:57

Title: Reflection
Pairing: MadaIta
Rating: PG-13 (I think...)
Warnings: Spoilers if you don't know who Madara is.
Disclaimer: Characters property of M. Kishimoto
A/N: I have looked it over and rewritten it over and over, I just hope it works. And please forgive my shortcomings when it comes to titles.
A/N 2: I know that red eyed people aren't weak. It ( Read more... )

madara, itachi, fanfic, ficlet, madaita

Comments 12

ootorotan September 11 2008, 14:12:25 UTC

That was very interesting. I don't usually read MadaIta..so I still don't know if i like it or not, but I'm strangely attracted to it xD
Anyway, I really liked it. Especially the last part. <3
I don't know.. I think I have a thing for Itachi being treated roughly.. xD
And also, I love how he said 'I would probably look like Sasuke'. I just find a sort of tenderness or sorrow in that sentence. <3
Good job :3

duskyblueskies September 13 2008, 18:28:24 UTC

I don't really read MadaIta either, but my friend and I have been very entranced with Lilys artwork lately so...xD
Thank you, I'm really glad that you liked it :D And for having a thing for Itachi being treated roughly...yeah...XP

Again, thank you <3

ootorotan September 14 2008, 10:31:06 UTC

Gah Lily <3 I'm so bad at keeping up with her site. I feel I'm missing out on so many sexy pics! D:
you don't happen to have any for me? xD

Hahah, he's hot like that. There's just no denying it. *w*

You're welcome~~ ♥

duskyblueskies September 14 2008, 12:50:31 UTC

Well, it depends on whether you have seen these sites or not: http://s278.photobucket.com/albums/kk83/lilylilylilyx/lily/ and
http://www.chomikuj.pl/Chomik.aspx?id=Shira234&sid=28

I'm eternally grateful to whoever put those sites together.
Even if Lily's art made me fall for Madara and breaks my heart with her Itachi-and-Sasuke-pics...

May I ask how do you make lines like that, across the text? I know how to make it bold, underlined and in italics, but I just can't figured that one out. I'm such a newbie when it comes to lj. (And I feel like I'm spamming you with questions, sorry :S.)

angie_white September 11 2008, 14:37:36 UTC

Oh, it's the MadaIta!

Poor Itachi...I get the feeling that he's sort of given up on himself, he doesn't care what happens to him anymore. And evil Madara is just using that. Hmpf.

I agree with carola chan, the Sasuke-line is really good. I just hope Madara doesn't get any stupid ideas of actually cutting Itachi's hair, seeing as how he was stupid enough to cut his own (because he can't have hidden it under the Tobi-mask, can he?)

Coming up with titles is the most difficult part when writing a story. I always suck at it.

I don't mean to be picky, but it should be 'Itachi hasn't' and not 'Itachi haven't'. I know that you know that of course, but it's always difficult to see one's own... slarvfel(?)^^

(Do we still count as closet fans? I mean, you wrote a fic and, well, I got an icon... couldn't resist. Not that it has to mean that any of us like him, though. Not at all.)

Oops. Long comment^^

duskyblueskies September 13 2008, 18:38:45 UTC

He can't cut Itachis hair, we'll have his head.

I have already told you the story featuring my high heel boots and all. Still, I don't understand how I missed that, so many times I reread it, just to catch stuff like that. Total fail on my part.

Well, as long as we are on the clear that we don't like that man so...

Long comments ftw!

Kakuzu x Hidan är canon.^^

minnen_av_april September 11 2008, 20:59:06 UTC

I've been using my Sasuke-icon a lot lately, but he is always mentioned in one way or another.

I totally agree with both carola chan and angie white, that the Sasuke-line is really good. And also, what I didn't think of when I read it the last time and what angie white noticed, is that feeling of Itachi's capitulation. That he hasn't got the strange or that he doesn't care about what's going to happen.

And also (I know I said it's before. but it's still true): I love the way you write him.

duskyblueskies September 13 2008, 18:46:56 UTC

Aw, thank you. It's nice to know that someone does <3

I think Itachi is really good at apathy.

I bought NIL today by the way, I forgot to mention that in the mail. And Greetings From Asbury Park, N.J. as well :)

cryangelictears October 14 2008, 14:59:44 UTC

Found this while browsing uchihaprodigy. I've never read MadaIta, but I like it. ^-^

duskyblueskies October 14 2008, 21:31:06 UTC

Thank you so much. That's a extremely nice comment to get :)

(I've been staring at your icon for quite some time now...)

cryangelictears October 14 2008, 21:39:34 UTC

Lol. I love it! And you are welcome <3

anonymous December 29 2008, 13:48:00 UTC

Wow, this makes me want to go for a search after more stuff with Madara/Itachi ^^
I think you´ve captured them both very good. Itachi the most. Madara I still find a bit difficult to imagine in such a serious mood..he´s still a lunatic-Tobi in my head. But I like this side of him...I guess that´s what makes me want to read more...

Aaaaa how can one not Love everything about Itachi!! I feel so sorry for him, he´s just given up on everything. Now Madara can just do whatever he wants. The other one...you mean Deidei?

- Milla-chan