Oneshot - Sweet Sorrow - Kisame/Itachi

Jan 19, 2009 21:29

Title: Sweet Sorrow
Pairing: Kisame/Itachi
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Spoilers up to chapter 405, implied nudity, sexual themes
Summary: You knew my brother well?
Disclaimer: Characters property of Kishimoto Masashi
This may be read as a companion piece to Reflection but it is not necessary to have read it to understand this one.
Much thanks to Milla for ( Read more... )

oneshot, itachi, naruto, kisaita, fanfic

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ootorotan January 19 2009, 21:19:34 UTC
Guh, I love you right now *___*
That was...I have no words really, but I loved it.
I love fics where Itachi sort of grows up under Kisame's watch, and where there are paralells between Itachi and Sasuke~ Mwah.
Also....slightly heartwrenching, nom <3

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duskyblueskies January 20 2009, 18:23:32 UTC
*feels the love* :D
Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it :3
Guh,I do that too and based how they are in canon it doesn't seem that far-fetched ;)
Itachi and Sasuke breaks my heart a little bit.

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anat_astarte January 19 2009, 22:01:06 UTC
I love this! I had always hoped to find a fic where Sasuke and Kisame have a talk about Itachi, and that the fic would have a lovely amount of ItaKisa and comparisions of Sasuke to Itachi in it- and this fic has made me very very happy! Beautiful work! <333

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duskyblueskies January 21 2009, 20:54:21 UTC
Thank you for your kind words! I'm glad that you liked it :)

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anonymous January 19 2009, 23:08:13 UTC
I say what I said earlier. I´ts a very good fic. It makes you giggle, say "awwww", fall in love and shead some tears <3 (look I can use this smiley now!)

I still giggle a little though..I mean he´s blue after all. But I´m getting used to it thanks to the loveliness of their pairing ^^

//Milla

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duskyblueskies January 20 2009, 17:39:53 UTC
:) <3

Heh, when I wrote part II, which I wrote last, I had a constant battle with myself,s some part of my brain seemed intent on having Kisame go "Hai." xP

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ladyfiction January 20 2009, 02:14:47 UTC
Well done. Few grammatical nicks, but nothing to worry about.

I would have liked a little more elaboration, especially for 5 and 6, but I respect that you chose to keep their feelings in check. Like, in the end, for instance, after Kisame's thought all this, his answer is still very simple, as opposed to cryptic, let's say. So, I think that (if you were going for that style) you wrote a wonderful little piece here.

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duskyblueskies January 22 2009, 20:39:22 UTC
Thank you. I really appreciate your comment.

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angie_white January 21 2009, 18:31:26 UTC
Oh! How could I have missed this last time I checked your page? Never mind, it was absolutely beautiful. I love when Itachi's being all polite and Kisame is kind of parent-ly pleased. And Itachi on Kisame's lap! I almost died...
And Kisame musing over the Uchiha hair!

Once again: beautiful.

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duskyblueskies January 22 2009, 20:55:59 UTC
Thanks dear <3

I so want a drawing of Itachi asleep on Kisame's lap. It's a pity I can't draw or this would have come with fanart^^

(Parent!Kisame Support Group ftw :P though a bit weird in the context...er...no.)

Icon love!

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angie_white January 23 2009, 07:46:30 UTC
Oh, it's bedlam-level on that! If only M had been into manga I would have forced him to draw me fanart...

(Parent/lover!Kisame Support Group! Or not...)

I know! I found a whole bunch of them over at chuunin:)

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