[fic] Breathe (J/E, post-Conversion, 1/1)

[duskwings]

Damn it, I'm sick and tired of looking at all of the junk in my "fic which is almost finished, but not quite because I am a raging perfectionist and have big issues with self-doubt" folder. Therefore, I am going to do something about it. Because I never delete anything, no matter how bad, that means I'm going to declare them done. Which means I'

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[joyfulfeather]

Oh, wow. Poor John. I want to hug him, seriously, because that's too much worry and pain to carry around. Not knowing what he's done... I'm glad Elizabeth did hug him. This is lovely, all around, and especially the last couple lines.

[duskwings]

Thanks! I'm really glad you liked it. :D

especially the last couple lines

So the ending wasn't too obscure? That's good. I was afraid that I'd swamped the last 200 or so words in so much metaphor that it wasn't even comprehensible.

[anr]

Wow. That is awesome. Well-written and extremely poignant. *applauds*

[duskwings]

Thank you! :D Glad you liked it.

[ankareeda]

Really, really nice! :)

[duskwings]

Thanks! :)

[dark_cygnet]

oh, this is so lovely! And I liked the last part! *g* Thanks for sharing it with us.

[duskwings]

I'm glad you enjoyed it! :D

[aoihikari]

wow!!!

that was very powerfully moving!

i loved it very much!

thank you so much for this! XD!!!

much love!
wannatee

[duskwings]

Thank you! :)