The Limits of Control: a BDSM love story, Chapter 6

[dumbtastic_duo]

Title: The Limits of Control: a BDSM love story
Chapter: Chapter 6/9?
Word count: About... 45,000 so far?
Series: 2003 anime... sort of. Assuming a slightly alternate ending.
Characters: Roy Mustang, Edward Elric, Alphonse Elric
Rating: M. Mature. Explicit. NC-17. Porn.
Warnings: Serious kinkiness. Pain play, whipping, dominance/submission, bondage

Comments

[amethyst_koneko]

*fans self!* yummy! :) Hard to tell which one of them, if either of them, is actually in control here! Roy lost control of himself the minute he saw Ed; Ed tried for control but lost it when Roy called him beautiful. Ed is adorable when he's all conflicted like this. :)

"This stuff you're doing - it's not that uncommon. Didn't you know that?" "I - no. I didn't. News to me." I kinda had to side with Al here. As much as Ed relies on books, as much as he's bound to have seen and heard in his travels, it is a bit odd that this one thing would've escaped his notice. So much for being a genius! XD

"I'm not surprised. A supply closet in Central Headquarters is an awfully strange place to leave your research." LOL! Al for the win again! ^_^

[dumbtastic_duo]

1) I have so much love for conflicted-and-confused!Edward. Definitely adorable.
2) Haha, well, genius never seems to serve Ed well when he wants it to. However, about the reading thing: I don't think that too many books on sex in general existed in 1919, much less ones on kinky sex. I doubt even more that they would be found in a library! So, when writing this, I decided that it would be actually pretty weird for Ed to have read about any sex stuffs. So I considered and rejected that particular FMA fandom convention!
3) Heehee, I was rather a fan of that line myself! <3 Alphonse.

Thanks for reading!

[dragonimp]

I see Ed's discovering that he has power >D. Maybe a little more than he bargained for.