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The Limits of Control: a BDSM love story, Chapter 3

Feb 27, 2013 14:39

Title: The Limits of Control: a BDSM love story
Chapter: Chapter 3
Series: 2003 anime... sort of. Assuming a slightly alternate ending.
Characters: Roy Mustang, Edward Elric, Alphonse Elric
Rating: M. Mature. Explicit. NC-17. Porn.
Warnings: Serious kinkiness. Pain play, whipping, dominance/submission, bondage.
Summary: Just because you want ( Read more... )

fma, limits of control, bdsm

Comments 6

dragonimp February 27 2013, 23:03:02 UTC

Oh come now, Al, you opened that can of worms, you should be ready for what you get >:). I can just imagine what Havoc told him. And Ed - Ed needs to sort himself out just so he doesn't blurt something out in public!

dumbtastic_duo February 28 2013, 04:12:17 UTC

1) Yes!
2) Yes!
3) Yes!

So true. Ed just needs to sort himself out. Yes. That could be something of a tagline for this fic XD

Thanks for reading!

pandoraculpa February 28 2013, 01:27:11 UTC

Ah, has Ed finally figured out how he feels about this arrangement? He still seemed a little off-balance earlier, but at dinner he was remarkably self-assured. With that attitude, I expect that his next 'session' with Roy will have a slightly different dynamic. Can't wait to see how it goes. ;)

dumbtastic_duo February 28 2013, 04:09:20 UTC

Oh, in the course of a pendulum swing, it looks like it's all even and nice and stable for a second... right before it goes off the deep end again! When confused, the wild Edward Elric behaves as a pendulum.

Alright, good, I'm glad that's clear!

His next session will be soon enough :D

amethyst_koneko February 28 2013, 02:21:53 UTC

pan-fried sin! This made me laugh! :)

Ed hated having a brother. He was disowning all former siblings.

"Fuck you," said Edward, feeling storm clouds gather over his head as he stomped out of the room, leaving his fucking telepathic brother behind, probably having stupid thoughts in his stupid head, goddammit.

^_^ Love Ed's inner dialogue!

Your Al here is pretty damned impressive! Note to self: never get on Al's bad side! XD There were definitely a few times during their conversation where Roy was clearly being beaten at his own game. "Innocent as a bear trap" summed it up nicely. :)

dumbtastic_duo February 28 2013, 04:05:39 UTC

I'm so happy I made you laugh! And I was particularly fond of that bit myself.

And Alphonse Elric is my trump card XD Part of his danger is that he looks so innocent, and acts so mild, that nobody would expect it of him! I wouldn't want to get on his bad side either.