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shigefan1992 in dulce_amore

Fair is just a four letter word

Oct 25, 2010 17:31

Title: Fair is just a four letter word
Summary: The phrase ‘All’s fair in love and war’ doesn’t even begin to cover the many problems Jin seems to have as he struggles with his inner demons and finds the hidden depths of his heart.
Pairings: Akame, Kokame
Genre: Friendship, romance, angst

Disclaimer: I don’t own them, although I wish I could have a ( Read more... )

x: angst, c: kamenashi, x: romance, series: fair is just a four letter word, c: yamashita, c: akanishi, g: kat-tun, fandom: je, p: kamenashi/tanaka, p: akanishi/kamenashi, t: multi-chapter, c: ueda, c: tanaka, c: taguchi, r: pg-13

Comments 15

granity20 October 25 2010, 22:02:51 UTC

fair is really just a four letter word....

that's reality for you!!sometimes it could lash on you to harshly and sometimes it can drown you in its blissful, dreamlike events...^_^

thank you for this!!!

shigefan1992 October 27 2010, 00:29:20 UTC

I hope it wasn't too depressing... but I'm really happy you liked it!

granity20 October 27 2010, 00:36:54 UTC

nah, it wasn't too depressing for me.just some dose of reality.

shigefan1992 October 27 2010, 00:44:17 UTC

Okay, great!

That's actually what I was kinda aiming for, which was why I was kinda mulling over their Conversations so much.

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fancyann1974 October 26 2010, 01:28:11 UTC

so glad that kame and jin have worked some of what was wrong out, poor jin to love kame like that and not have it returned.
loved it
thank you for sharing

shigefan1992 October 27 2010, 00:30:36 UTC

Well...nothing's perfect, and I did feel kinda bad about hurting Jin like that...

Thanks for the comment!

kazuyachan October 26 2010, 04:21:40 UTC

Wow that interesting
hardly kokame would win over akame
I guess u did it
u r good

shigefan1992 October 27 2010, 00:35:50 UTC

lol thanks...I guess Kokame over Akame is a bit rare

lanheart October 26 2010, 07:14:49 UTC

i missed part 2, i guess i'll just comment for both here :)
although it's still a cliffhanger in part 2, not knowing what exactly jin said to kame lol
i guess, in the end, kame had no feeling for jin and that's that. The ending's rather sad for jin, but i think it's really the best one :)

shigefan1992 October 27 2010, 00:47:13 UTC

Yeah you got the general idea XD

Really? I was starting to think nobody would particularly like the ending. So I'm glad you found it fitting.

fazlyn_n October 26 2010, 13:18:38 UTC

ohhhhhhhhhhh....bittersweet ending...
I actually expecting the fic to be longer. I guess I want more drama...LOL

A bit sad for Jin but sometime things just dont work the way we want it too...

Thanks for sharing!!!

shigefan1992 October 27 2010, 00:48:20 UTC

Actually it was originally alot longer, but I cut it down...I had a bit too much fluffiness going on towards the end XD

Thanks for reading!