J2 | pas de deux | NC-17

[dugindeep]

Title: pas de deux [a dance for two]
Words: 2100
Summary: Jensen escapes the noise of the rock star life for something quieter.
Notes: For smpc; based on this art: The Needle by a_biting_smile. Big thanks to cherie_morte for middle-of-the-night beta! <3

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Comments

[rozearkana]

You’re muse certainly earned her keep last night. This is gorgeous!! The language feels so lush and your phrasing and descriptions made me feel both the frenzy and the contrasting calm, beautifully. It was like taking a deep breath and letting it all go. So lovely! (And yay for bendy Jared and inside-his-headspace Jensen.) Muuaahh!!

[dugindeep]

Thank you looooovely <333 I wanted to invoke a lot of the feel that her art did, so I'm glad it worked out for you <333

[one_2_3_4]

This is so beautiful, like an unfolding piece of music, it starts tight and rigid and controlled, then as it unfolds, smoothes into something languid and peaceful. Staccato, leggato.

[dugindeep]

Awesome! Yes, I wanted it to be kinda tight and tense with Jensen needing to escape and then how peaceful and refreshing it is for him to be with Jared <333

[zubeneschamali]

BALLET!JARED!!!!!!

that is all

No, but also how Jensen gets so much satisfaction and pleasure out of tending to Jared, not even from coming himself. Beautiful.

[dugindeep]

ALL THE PLEASURE :DDD

thank you darling!

[madebyme_x]

I loved how these two worlds collide: rockstar!Jensen and balletdancer!Jared. Opposites certainly attract and the heat and sense of home were perfectly captured. I loved every word of it!

Thanks for sharing :)

[dugindeep]

Thank you so much! Part of what I loved about the art was the opposing images of the two and wanted to put more to that idea. Glad you liked it!

[beelikej]

Gorgeous, love this near flow of conciousness style and being in Jensen's head until he finds peace. <3

[dugindeep]

Thank you so much!! Definitely was going for the chaos withering away until he was where he wanted to be with Jared <3333