Comments | dugindeep: J2 | Domestic Dreams

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J2 | Domestic Dreams | NC-17

Feb 05, 2017 13:04

Title: Domestic Dreams
Words 4,000
Rating/Warning: NC-17/Prostitution
Summary: Jared is a businessman on his monthly work trip to the East Coast. Jensen is the escort he pays to act out a game of domesticity.
Notes: Written for smpc. Huge thanks to firesign10 for the beta and suggestions!

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Comments 15

the_rant_girl February 5 2017, 20:57:52 UTC

Ahhhhhhhh, Amy this is SO freaking lovely and hurty and UGH!! So very gorgeously done, all the little pangs Jared has so desperately wanting this fantasy with Jensen to be real, and my heart really does break for him, and thinking of the life he leads outside of their bubble. And I LOVE ALL their banter, and Jensen is just so UGH!! So perfectly Jensen-y, and I really loved the way you wrote the part about the envelope and how he put his glass down on it, and UGH!! ♥♥

zara_zee February 5 2017, 22:01:02 UTC

So much emotional depth here. I found myself feeling so desperately sad for Jared and wistfully wishing he could have the life he wanted for real. Really lovely, moving piece.

sandymg February 6 2017, 01:44:13 UTC

Oh. Sexy yet so poignant. Guh.

mdlaw February 6 2017, 02:36:36 UTC

Oh break my heart; why don't you!?

cherie_morte February 6 2017, 02:54:11 UTC

He savors the heat of the liquor on his tongue and down his throat, focuses on the way his chest burns with the swallow instead of worrying over the ticking seconds between now and him. - Fuck, that's such a good line. The way it sets up our expectations and puts us in the same place as Jared...I think I could taste the whiskey, even. *sneaks in through your window* *gives the cats treats so they are distracted* *steals this line* *sneaks back out*

You just emojied. You’re growing up so fast.

You just conjugated emoji. You’re embarrassing yourself fast. - WHAT BEAUTIFUL IDIOTS

and catalogs the edges of every tooth - *long row of eyeball emojis*

He moves lower and enjoys the softness of Jensen’s imperfect stomach. - WHY ARE YOU ATTACKING ME LIKE THIS and and and "Jared likes to think it makes him less of a wet dream and more of a reality THAT'S EXACTLY IT. I LOVE HIS TUM TUM SO MUCH HE IS SO HUMAN EXCEPT FOR HOW HE'S AN ALIEN. ;____ ( ... )