Cradle Broken Glass (SPN Gen): AU 9.23

May 22, 2014 09:06

Title: Cradle Broken Glass [SPN Gen]
Words: ~800
Summary: Sam had seen a lot of shit in his life, including his brother dying for the umpteenth time and rising back up with resilience. But it's the thing he misses that will be the most trouble. Alternate Ending to "Do You Believe in Miracles?" and thus spoilers to the final moments of 9.23.
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gen, fic, spn

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violateraindrop May 22 2014, 14:20:15 UTC
That was beautiful <3

I have to say, this season sucked, but I gasped when I saw the ending. This could be so awesome, but it's probably too late now for that :/

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dugindeep May 22 2014, 14:39:52 UTC
Thank you darling <3

I didn't expect it to end the way it did, but it still felt flat once I knew that he turned.

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reddevilpoes May 22 2014, 15:20:50 UTC
Thanks for this!

The ending almost made up for the sucky season..At least now I'm looking forward to season 10!

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dugindeep May 22 2014, 15:56:09 UTC
It will definitely be interesting to see what they do with this!

Thanks for reading and commenting :)

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zubeneschamali May 22 2014, 15:55:58 UTC
This is exactly how it should have ended. Sam POV, the brothers reunited, but still the fear over what's to come. Glad you were spoiled if it led to this. :)

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dugindeep May 22 2014, 16:01:12 UTC
Yes! I think it would have been more heart-wrenching ... Sam's despair, the hug, Dean seeming okay, and then his black eyes.

Thank you dear! :D

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strgazr04 May 23 2014, 04:23:00 UTC
Yes! Exactly. I wish it had happened like this. Almost in the same vein as the scene of Sam's shadow outside Lisa's house in Swan Song. I think it would have been more poignant. We'd get that rush of 'yay brotherly moment' before the shock of '...oh shit'. :P

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dugindeep May 23 2014, 14:02:38 UTC
YES! :D

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borgmama1of5 May 22 2014, 16:58:13 UTC
Excellently chilling! I hope we get something like this, where Sam doesn't know right away!

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dugindeep May 22 2014, 17:04:53 UTC
Thanks! I think that would be good, too. Kind of mirror Season 6 where Dean is happy to have Sam back, but doesn't quite know what's wrong yet :D

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willowfear May 22 2014, 22:20:22 UTC
very well written ! Definetly a version that the writters could use ! Let's wait and see shall we ?!

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dugindeep May 23 2014, 14:02:47 UTC
Thank you so much!

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