Excellent story, I felt so sorry for him when they gave him eternity up in the stars which I think has made him go a bit cuckoo because he's taking to the stars and he thinks they're answering him back.
You did a great job writing this, it had humour and saddness all rolled up in a neat little package.
Thanks for sharing, going to the art post now to leave a comment there also.
Having readers feel sorry for Lucifer is a great compliment! :) I wasn't sure exactly how this would sit with people - crack or having some moments - and I'm glad you enjoyed the cross of the two here.
Have I mentioned that I adore Gabriel in this? His quips and the way he worked them to get the witnesses to his advantage throughout the first half of the story were wonderful. I also like how Death is such a presence no one dares speak against him. Love that guy. :')
I think I've already told you I really loved the second half of the story. The slow progression of Lucifer slipping was really sad and beautiful.
Thank you so, so much again for writing for my prompt! You did an awesome job and I couldn't ask for any better! <3
Ahhh thank you so much dear! I do love how Gabriel came to life here, even as it's Lucifer's story. Glad to hear you enjoyed that part as well.
Sad and beautiful are great ways to encompass the last half. I'm very, very, very happy that you're happy with the story, and enjoyed the collaboration! ♥
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Lucifer waves his hands and moans. “Don’t even ask me. I refused to touch Apple. Michael was all over that hot mess.”
Unmitigated proof that Bill Gates is the Devil? ;D
Loved this, bb, just LOVED it! Brava!
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OF COURSE :D
Thank you so much! Glad to hear it struck a nice chord between entertaining but moving ♥
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You did a great job writing this, it had humour and saddness all rolled up in a neat little package.
Thanks for sharing, going to the art post now to leave a comment there also.
*hugs*
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*hugs back*
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I liked the "Me damnit" and "Dad damnit" especially. :)
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Thanks for reading!
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it was stopped by two walking flannel stores
Haha, best description of the Winchesters I've ever heard! Also, it's amusing that Gabe wouldn't defy Death (unlike Dean)
As if a man who fails to acknowledge the period has right to mock me
Cackling out loud.
“I didn’t know he was there! I thought it was St. Nicholas.”
I love everything about you.
How did you make me suddenly completely sad about LUCIFER? This is so beautifully done, wow! Love it to bits <3
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I think I've already told you I really loved the second half of the story. The slow progression of Lucifer slipping was really sad and beautiful.
Thank you so, so much again for writing for my prompt! You did an awesome job and I couldn't ask for any better! <3
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Sad and beautiful are great ways to encompass the last half. I'm very, very, very happy that you're happy with the story, and enjoyed the collaboration! ♥
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