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Oct 03, 2009 12:25

Title: You Arrested My Mind
Words: 2,000ish
Rating: Light R - one curse word
Warning: References things up to Ep 5.04
Summary: Sam sees himself in 2014.
Notes: Title and cut text from Gavin DeGraw’s “Belief,” which was on repeat through most of this.

In the form of your body, with the wrath of a god )

.spn tag, .spn, .fic

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phanie28 October 4 2009, 15:41:48 UTC
WOW!! That's all I can say really, this was perfect, exactly what Sam's encounter with his future self as Lucifer should have been. I could see this whole scene in my head and I so wish they'd done it just like that in the show. WOW!

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dugindeep October 4 2009, 18:16:29 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm glad you felt it rang true to the show. Highest compliment! :-)

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labseraph October 5 2009, 09:17:38 UTC
I like Lucifer and Sam's interaction in the first part; it resonates sincerely with what we saw in the episode. Could just see it unfold so beautifully.

I'd posit that there is no need for Sam to remind Dean to kill him before Lucifer could possess him; didn't Lucifer as much as promised him that even if Sam killed himself, he would just be brought back?

It just threw me off, is all.

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dugindeep October 5 2009, 14:29:30 UTC
Thank you for the first part!

For the second, I did a total 'doh!' when reading this. Yeah, that totally slipped my mind, but then I'm excusing it away that Sam would probably still ask Dean to do whatever he could to stop it? I dunno. :(

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lazy_daze October 6 2009, 21:48:00 UTC
Oh, WONDERFUL!! Goshhhh. You totally nailed Lucifer AND Sam, what an awesome conversation.

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dugindeep October 6 2009, 21:48:26 UTC
Thank you darling!

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macbyrne October 6 2009, 23:32:01 UTC
*deep breath*

Oh, Sam. Sammy baby. I just want to hug him and tell him it'll all be okay. His pain and fear and despair is just killing me here, and I love it.

Awesome, awesome coda. Beautifully done.

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dugindeep October 7 2009, 00:00:58 UTC
Dean needs to hug him real soon.

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dana_aeryn October 8 2009, 02:27:29 UTC
Very well done.Felt for Sam.

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dugindeep October 8 2009, 04:41:41 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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