i got a girl who's oh so good, she's got everything!grace_fullyJanuary 24 2010, 17:38:37 UTC
"Dad, stop. Please God. Dad! What is this? Did you eat an ozone for breakfast? I don't even, you are so disgusting. Mom is going to kill you. Jensen's not even gonna be able to find the pieces. God, they smell, you are so gross, I am rolling down the windows. Oh my God, unlock them! Dad!"
Jared finally laughs; it falls out of him in a loud thunk, hitting the windshield and bouncing all over the car. His chest hurts from forcing out burps, and he's a little nauseous. But grossing out his teenage daughter has easily become his favorite past time.
When he finally looks over, he can see that she's hanging her head out the window theatrically, gulping in fresh summer air, the neat bun of her sable hair being torn at by the breeze. He smiles so hard his face hurts.
"You know you wanna rip one," he says.
She pulls herself back into the car, smooth cheeks tinged pink with amusement and wind burn. Her brows drop down into an expression she got from Jensen: I hope you're joking.Jared's mouth curves into a challenging smile, and if he knows
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Re: i got a girl who's oh so good, she's got everything!corbyinozJanuary 25 2010, 09:51:51 UTC
This is brilliant. Absolutely spot on. This is the stuff that counts in families, not the smoochy, sucky, "Wuv you!" stuff, but this casual intimacy that is impossible to fake and so hard to capture in writing - and you've done it, easy as that.
Re: i got a girl who's oh so good, she's got everything!keyweegirlieJanuary 25 2010, 19:10:25 UTC
Would it be weird to say this is adorable? 'Cause this is totally adorable in my opinion...then again I'm a Mom that has burping contests with her 6 year old son.
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Jared finally laughs; it falls out of him in a loud thunk, hitting the windshield and bouncing all over the car. His chest hurts from forcing out burps, and he's a little nauseous. But grossing out his teenage daughter has easily become his favorite past time.
When he finally looks over, he can see that she's hanging her head out the window theatrically, gulping in fresh summer air, the neat bun of her sable hair being torn at by the breeze. He smiles so hard his face hurts.
"You know you wanna rip one," he says.
She pulls herself back into the car, smooth cheeks tinged pink with amusement and wind burn. Her brows drop down into an expression she got from Jensen: I hope you're joking.Jared's mouth curves into a challenging smile, and if he knows ( ... )
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