Let Me Watch You (Destroy Yourself) | Gerard Pique/Marc Bartra | Nc-17

Dec 11, 2010 21:51


Title: Let Me Watch You (Destroy Yourself)
Author: Ducky McLain
Pairing: Gerard Pique & Marc Bartra
Word Count: 3,167
Warning: violence, mild gore (reference to blood)
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: In my head Geri is writing his vows for Marc as you read this.
Summary: Geri decides it’s time to switch up Marc’s after practice routine.
Let Me Watch You (Destroy Yourself) )

nc-17, gerard pique, series: watch you, fanfic, pi, marc bartra, barcelona

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abitof_m0nkeys December 12 2010, 04:27:57 UTC
hngggg. wow. never thought of this pairing before but i liked it. especially the beginning, how pique just knew. ahahahah well done.

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duckiidoo December 12 2010, 14:39:38 UTC
I like the idea of pervert Pique waaaay too much. Gives me ideas to do a prequel with Marc in the shower room~

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abitof_m0nkeys December 13 2010, 02:16:56 UTC
...uhm. yes please.

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duckiidoo December 13 2010, 03:16:26 UTC
Oh dear, what am I getting myself into.

And here I was, supposed to be doing an Andreu Fontas/Marc bb fic...Oh well.

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kitty69lover December 12 2010, 09:08:24 UTC
:o

the pair itself is so very hot!!!! so well written and steaming. i loved how you made a first time seem realistic without being gross [blood could make it messy]

excellent fic :D

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duckiidoo December 12 2010, 14:45:03 UTC
Oh god, the emote had me laughing so hard.

And thank you! Marc has been sorely ignored in my eyes and I needed to get him out in the open.

And I'm glad the first time worked. It's the very first time I've ever written a virgin fic and didn't know how it would turn out.

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balrogslayerg December 12 2010, 10:16:50 UTC
a new pairing! very hot indeed! Great idea to put two hotties like Gery and Marc together, the result couldn't be better!
Awesome fic, very very very well written!

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duckiidoo December 12 2010, 14:38:31 UTC
Thanks so much!

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duckiidoo December 14 2010, 02:43:58 UTC
Thanks, doll~

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aseinum December 13 2010, 17:12:12 UTC
i have no idea what to say...

piqué/bartra, yessss please. first time i've read a fic by you. are they all as amazing as this one?

i'll just put it simple: i loved it! thanks!

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duckiidoo December 14 2010, 02:44:56 UTC
.////.

oh dear, that's so flattering, thank you so very much.

I don't have much posted to my lj, but you'll have to go read and find out for yourself.
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