Original - Hot Chocolate Drabbles 2011-12

[eltea]

Title: Soul-Light
Universe: Menagerie (alt.)
Prompt: “crackling”, from pulped_fictions
Wordcount: 165
Genre: Not quite sure. XD
Rating/Warnings: K
Summary: Dusk and a ghost story from Toni’s childhood.
Author’s Notes: Decided to do Will and Toni, like last year. :)

Comments

[rufflefeather]

Oh this!

to land on tiptoe across the water, and the sun is melting into the trees

So lovely! ♥__♥

[ca_te]

Alright darling, you sure are one of the most talented writers I know, really! Your description is amazing, you chose the words so carefully and it really seems to be there, looking at the fireflies with Tony. Lovely!

[tierfal]

Decided to do Will and Toni
WHAT A COINCIDENCE; I WILL BE DOING WILL AND TONI, TOO!

…/crass and useless :DDDDDD

To be slightly less crass and useless, I heartily agree with the general consensus that you've used *particularly* beautiful imagery this time. ^______^

[1_rhiannon_1]

his family always says the luminescent specks are the souls of the dead trying to find their way home

That's a really lovely image, actually :) I really enjoyed reading this!

[switchbladesis]

This is a lovely little scene, just a little slice of something incredibly beautiful.